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Mathematics and Children's MisconceptionsAnalyses of children's misconceptions in mathematics indicate that children have considerable difficulties in dealing with fractions. Given the choice of 50 percent and 25 percent, and asked to choose which number v.1

Mathematics and Children's MisconceptionsAnalyses of children's misconceptions in mathematics indicate that children have considerable difficulties in dealing with fractions. Given the choice of 50 percent and 25 percent, and asked to choose which number v. 1
Opening multinational companies have become quite a trend in developing nations. This brings lots of pros and cons. This essay intends to analyse both the positive and negative impacts of it. The first and foremost advantage of multinational companies is in creating employment, especially for local people. A number of employees are needed to complete several tasks within a company which results into numerous job openings. It has been observed that local people are always preferred to avoid travel overheads. Consequently, it improves the economy of the area and in turn the whole nation. Secondly, when an entrepreneur desires to extend his business in another country, a certain amount needs to be paid in the form of taxes. This process not only strengthens the economy, but also improves the living standard of people by giving employments. To illustrate, the developed countries like the United States and Japan opened their software and car companies in developing countries like India which certainly has created lots of jobs for Indians. Thirdly, with the advent of multinational companies, a number of technological products become available to other industries and the common people, which is considered as a potential growth of any country. For example, software companies develop many applications for restaurants, banks and so on, which not only reduces the manual work but also fastens many processes. Instead of maintaining registers for bank customers; computer databases and other applications can handle and manage the bank related services. On the downside, a few of the companies exploit their employees by paying them less wages for cost reduction and incurring more profits. Moreover, enormous waste and rubbish has been produced by these companies which sometimes is non-biodegradable. To use cheap stuff, the MNC’s are also inclined towards purchasing non -recyclable products which adds to the waste. There are not even proper plans for waste management in growing countries leading to serious consequences such as an increase in pollution. To sum up, Multinational companies are both boon and bane for the developing countries. However, a number of cons can be overcome by implementing strict policies against waste disposal and employment wages.
Opening
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multinational
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companies
have become quite a trend in developing nations. This brings lots of pros and cons. This essay intends to
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analyse
both the
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positive
and
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negative
impacts of it.

The
first
and foremost advantage of
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multinational
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companies
is in creating employment,
especially
for local
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people
. A number of employees
are needed
to complete several tasks within a
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company
which results into numerous job openings. It has
been observed
that local
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people
are always preferred to avoid travel overheads.
Consequently
, it
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improves
the economy of the area and in turn the whole nation.

Secondly
, when an entrepreneur desires to extend his business in another
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country
, a certain amount needs to
be paid
in the form of taxes. This process not
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only
strengthens the economy,
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but
also
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improves
the living standard of
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people
by giving employments. To illustrate, the developed
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countries
like the United States and Japan opened their software and car
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companies
in developing
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countries
like India which
certainly
has created lots of jobs for Indians.

Thirdly
, with the advent of
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multinational
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companies
, a number of technological products become available to other industries and the common
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people
, which
is considered
as a potential growth of any
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country
.
For example
, software
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companies
develop
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many
applications for restaurants, banks and
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so
on, which not
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only
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reduces
the manual work
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but
also
fastens
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many
processes.
Instead
of maintaining registers for bank customers; computer databases and other applications can handle and manage the bank related services.

On the downside, a few of the
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companies
exploit their employees by paying them
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less
wages for cost reduction and incurring more profits.
Moreover
, enormous
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waste
and rubbish has
been produced
by these
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companies
which
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sometimes
is non-biodegradable. To
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use
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cheap
stuff, the
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MNC
’s are
also
inclined towards purchasing non -recyclable products which
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adds
to the
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waste
. There are not even proper plans for
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waste
management in growing
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countries
leading to serious consequences such as an increase in pollution.

To sum up,
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Multinational
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companies
are both boon and bane for the developing
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countries
.
However
, a number of cons can
be overcome
by implementing strict policies against
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waste
disposal and employment wages.
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IELTS essay Mathematics and Children's MisconceptionsAnalyses of children's misconceptions in mathematics indicate that children have considerable difficulties in dealing with fractions. Given the choice of 50 percent and 25 percent, and asked to choose which number v. 1

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
354 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 7.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
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