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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 word v.7

The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre.
Education being the backbone of a nation is a vivid indicator of development. I partially agree with the view that education, in particular the primary level of education should be free for everyone. To begin with, it is a natural human tendency that anything which is made free, declines in its value. The same can be the case with education also. The reason higher education is viewed with so much of respect is that there is an immense effort which goes into acquiring it. If it was otherwise, a lot of students would not put their mind & soul into it. Furthermore, making higher education free would even lower the motivation level of professors & faculties, thereby lowering the overall quality of education. Consequently, there are chances that the failure percentage may increase in case education is made free as the student would not have to bear the burden of fees anymore. There are various ways in which the avenues of education can be widely opened & access made easy to every section & strata of people such as providing easy education loans with reduced rate of interest, introducing various effective scholarship policies to the meritorious students at the school level, maximum funding to colleges & universities. For example, the already existing Swami Vivekanand scholarship for the single girl child, for students from socially & economically backward communities has enabled India to progress in the field of education & research. To substantiate further, it has been reported that the number of school dropouts has reduced from 25 million in 2003 to 8. 1million in 2009. To conclude with, primary education should be made free, but higher education should be made more accessible & not completely free.
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being the backbone of a nation is a vivid indicator of development. I
partially
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agree
with the view that
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education
,
in particular
the primary level of
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education
should be
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free
for everyone.

To
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begin
with, it is a natural human tendency that anything which
is made
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free
, declines in its value. The same can be the case with
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education
also
. The reason higher
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education
is viewed
with
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so
much of respect is that there is an immense effort which goes into acquiring it. If it was
otherwise
,
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a lot of
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students
would not put their mind & soul into it.
Furthermore
, making higher
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education
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free
would even lower the motivation level of professors & faculties, thereby lowering the
overall
quality of
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education
.
Consequently
, there are chances that the failure percentage may increase in case
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education
is made
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free
as the
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student
would not
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have to
bear the burden of fees anymore.

There are various ways in which the avenues of
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education
can be
widely
opened & access made easy to every section & strata of
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people
such as providing easy
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education
loans with
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reduced
rate of interest, introducing various effective scholarship policies to the meritorious
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students
at the school level, maximum funding to colleges & universities.
For example
, the already existing Swami
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Vivekanand
scholarship for the single girl child, for
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students
from
socially
&
economically
backward communities has enabled India to progress in the field of
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education
& research. To substantiate
further
, it has
been reported
that the number of school dropouts has
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reduced
from 25 million in 2003 to 8. 1million in 2009.

To conclude
with, primary
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education
should
be made
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free
,
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but
higher
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education
should
be made
more accessible & not completely
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free
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS essay The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
286 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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