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q2 Some students tend to live alone, while others may want to share theirrooms with their roommates. Which way of living do you think is better forstudents and why? v.1

q2 Some students tend to live alone, while others may want to share theirrooms with their roommates. Which way of living do you think is better forstudents and why? v. 1
In this modern world, online education is a comparatively new trend and it's being used by most of the universities to teach their courses. While some negative aspects are presented in the development which could not be neglected, but the advantages are more than that which outweighed the demerits. To begin with, many universities in developed countries offering online courses, as they started this thing by doing proper research. These kind of research proved that online courses are very helpful for students as well as for teachers. Online courses are designed by various experienced teachers and hence they maintain a rigid quality. The internet facility helps people to enrol in a course without considering time and distance. This kind of learning helps many housewives and old people to complete their education without having it effect on their personal life's. For instance, as many as twenty five thousand housewives complete their education or any kind of diploma in one year. The traditional classroom method are not essential for them as they are very busy in their own work. Moreover, the internet based courses are easier to follow and some can retake the missing lesson over and over again. In contrary, the downside of this trend is the lack of supervision by the teacher. The face to face interaction is very much needed to clear doubts, which cannot be cleared in long distance learning. Online courses offered by prestigious university are often very expensive to afford by the poor people. Teacher guidance and mutual support are needed to boost up the confidence of students, and its play a vital role in the student success. To conclude, technological advancement in education, especially to the online education, is reducing the gap between the students and studies to make an unemployed person's world.
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online
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education
is a
comparatively
new trend and it's being
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used
by most of the universities to teach their
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courses
. While
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some
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negative
aspects
are presented
in the development which could not
be neglected
,
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but
the advantages are more than that which outweighed the demerits.

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begin
with,
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many
universities in
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developed countries
offering
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online
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courses
, as they
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started
this thing by doing proper research.
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These kind
of research proved that
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online
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courses
are
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very
helpful for
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students
as well
as for
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teachers
.
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Online
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courses
are designed
by various experienced
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teachers
and
hence
they maintain a rigid quality. The internet facility
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helps
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people
to enrol in a
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course
without considering time and distance. This kind of learning
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helps
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many
housewives and
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people
to complete their
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education
without having it effect on their personal life's.
For instance
, as
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many
as
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twenty five
thousand housewives complete their
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education
or any kind of diploma in one year. The traditional classroom method are not essential for them as they are
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very
busy in their
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own
work.
Moreover
, the internet based
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courses
are easier to follow and
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some
can retake the missing lesson over and over again.

In contrary, the downside of this trend is the lack of supervision by the
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teacher
. The face to face interaction is
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very
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much needed
to
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clear
doubts, which cannot
be cleared
in long distance learning.
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Online
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courses
offered by prestigious university are
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often
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very
expensive to afford by the poor
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people
.
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Teacher
guidance and mutual support
are needed
to boost up the confidence of
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students
, and its play a vital role in the
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student
success.

To conclude
, technological advancement in
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education
,
especially
to the
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online
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education
, is reducing the gap between the
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students
and studies to
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make
an unemployed person's world.
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IELTS essay q2 Some students tend to live alone, while others may want to share theirrooms with their roommates. Which way of living do you think is better forstudents and why? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
298 words
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Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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