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Prevention is better than cure Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures To what extent do you agree v.1

Prevention is better than cure Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures 1
Perusing another person's advice is totally depends upon individual. While many believe to go with our older one's thought process, another group of people retaliates their judgments. This essay will discuss why accepting the opinions of the elder ones, but why provocation of their conventions is ultimately a different path. There are tremendous advantages to follow our elders in numerous life circumstances. Simply, having a vast of experience to deal with a diverse range of problems is an additional star on their shoulders. For example, younger generation still follows the older's fitness formulas to get big muscular body. Additionally, guidance of old person always save plenty of time for youngsters if seriously taken. Opposing the elderly people also being practiced in the real world nowadays. Many of us saying that being a smart human we should defeat such thoughts which are not matched with the current pace of the life. As an example, spending on lavishness is totally unacceptable by our grandparents and always give advice to live with their old lifestyle. Adding into this, teenagers believe as time changes we should also change their concepts and ideas otherwise we would be battling to survive in the future. With the introduction of the new era of these young buds, traditional thoughts are being challenged. This essay discussed why opting the help of older ones is important while taking decisions but why showing dissent in old judgments gives another birth to new things. In my opinion, going with an experience is a wise option because they already faced such conditions.
Perusing another person's advice is
totally
depends upon individual. While
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many
believe to
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go with
our older one's
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
process, another group of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
retaliates their judgments. This essay will discuss why accepting the opinions of the elder
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ones
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
why provocation of their conventions is
ultimately
a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
path.

There are tremendous advantages to follow our elders in numerous life circumstances.
Simply
, having a vast of experience to deal with a diverse range of problems is an additional star on their shoulders.
For example
, younger generation
still
follows the older's fitness formulas to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
muscular body.
Additionally
, guidance of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
person always save
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
plenty
of time for youngsters if
seriously
taken.

Opposing the elderly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
also
being practiced
in the real world nowadays.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Many
of us saying that being a smart human we should defeat such thoughts which are not matched with the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
pace of the life. As an example, spending on lavishness is
totally
unacceptable by our grandparents and always give advice to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
with their
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
lifestyle. Adding into this,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
teenagers
believe as time
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
we should
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
their concepts and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
otherwise
we would be battling to survive in the future.

With the introduction of the new era of these young buds, traditional thoughts are
being challenged
. This essay discussed why opting the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
of older
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
ones
is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
while taking decisions
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
why showing dissent in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
judgments gives another birth to new things. In my opinion, going with an experience is a wise option
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they already faced such conditions.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Prevention is better than cure Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
259 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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