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Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree? v.8

Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think they should be banned. v. 8
Thousand of factories are producing tons of plastic bags which are very popularly used by the people for shopping purpose. It is evident that discarded plastic bags have a hazardous impact on the environment. It is suggested that the solution might be a complete ban on the product. The given standpoint seems to be valid for the following objective reasons. Plastic bags are harmful to wild and marine life. They often end up floating in the seas which are the home to many mammals, fish and other creatures. To exemplify, sea turtles often mistake floating bags for jellyfish, which is their main food. The tragedy is that once they eat the plastic bags, they can get caught up and wrapped round, which means subsequent death for them. It is evident that, were the government to halt plastic bag production, the outcome might be auspicious. Moreover, plastic bags tend to get stuck in most recycling machinery. Since plastic bag recycling requires a piece of specialized equipment that can break down the plastic and mould it into a new product, most municipalities do not have the budget to include them in their waste management program. Add to this fact that plastic grocery bag recycling has a problem with their clearness. Ideally, to be suitable for recycling, bags need to be clean, which is often a problem considering that we use them to carry groceries and potentially leaky goods. It is, thus, apparent that the best solution to prevent plastic bag pollution is to cease to exist them at all. To summarize, plastic bags have a dangerous impact on the environment, which is invisible to the average person. Thus, ceasing to produce plastic bags might give considerable improvements to the climate conditions in the long run.
Use "a Thousand" or use a number before 'Thousand'.
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of factories are producing tons of
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plastic
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bags
which are
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very
popularly
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used
by the
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people
for shopping purpose. It is evident that discarded
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plastic
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bags
have a hazardous impact on the environment. It
is suggested
that the solution might be a complete ban on the product. The
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given
standpoint seems to be valid for the following objective reasons.

Plastic
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bags
are harmful to wild and marine life. They
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often
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end
up floating in the seas which are the home to
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many
mammals, fish and other creatures. To exemplify, sea turtles
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often
mistake floating
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bags
for jellyfish, which is their main food. The tragedy is that once they eat the
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plastic
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bags
, they can
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get
caught up and wrapped round, which means subsequent death for them. It is evident that, were the
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government
to halt
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plastic
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bag
production, the outcome might be auspicious.

Moreover
,
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plastic
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bags
tend to
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get
stuck in most
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recycling
machinery. Since
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plastic
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bag
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recycling
requires a piece of specialized equipment that can break down the
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plastic
and
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mould
it into a new product, most municipalities do not have the budget to include them in their waste management program.
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Add
to this fact that
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plastic
grocery
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bag
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recycling
has a problem with their clearness.
Ideally
, to be suitable for
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recycling
,
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bags
need to be clean, which is
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often
a problem considering that we
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use
them to carry groceries and
potentially
leaky
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goods
. It is,
thus
, apparent that the best solution to
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prevent
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plastic
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bag
pollution is to cease to exist them at all.

To summarize
,
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plastic
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bags
have a
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dangerous
impact on the environment, which is invisible to the average person.
Thus
, ceasing to produce
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plastic
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bags
might give considerable improvements to the climate conditions in the long run.
4Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
28Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think they should be banned. v. 8

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
293 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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