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Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree? v.4

Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think they should be banned. v. 4
The Earth is getting hotter and hotter! One of the problems that cause global warming is the use of plastic bags, which contain many kinds of chemistry damages our natural environment. There is a suggestion that the use of plastic bags should be prohibited. In my opinion, I agree with that statement. Plastic bag causes plenty of problems for the environment, especially land and sea. According to scientists, the plastic bag has killed lots of animals which live in the sea every year. It is damaging submarine life. In addition, it takes over a hundred years to destroy only one plastic bag. As we all know, global warming is the biggest problem that humans have to solve as soon as possible. Sadly, the use of plastic bags is ranked as the top of the activity that harms the environment. There are plenty of assessments prove that plastic bag is not an environmental friendly object. Therefore, the prohibition of plastic bags is needed in every country. In fact, there are some countries has taken action for this situation. To illustrate, in Singapore, the customers will have an extra charge for their products if they ask for the plastic carrier. In my opinion, this is counted as a good start to prevent the overuse of plastic bag nowadays. Limited the use of plastic carries not only helps humans to save the Earth, but also gives the government an opportunity to reduce the cost of producing plastic bags every year. To conclude, banned the use of plastic bags is one of the important steps that help humans to protect the Earth. In addition, it can be done easily by individuals as well. Yes, I admit that plastic bags have made our life easier since the day it was invented. However, it is time to stop using it to save our nature. I hope that there will be more and more people aware of the cons of using plastic bags in their daily life and take action for it. The environment needs our helps!
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use
of
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plastic
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bags
, which contain
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many
kinds of chemistry damages our natural
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environment
. There is a suggestion that the
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use
of
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plastic
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bags
should
be prohibited
. In my opinion, I
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agree
with that statement.

Plastic
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bag
causes
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plenty
of problems for the
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environment
,
especially
land and sea. According to scientists, the
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plastic
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bag
has killed lots of animals which
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live
in the sea every year. It is damaging submarine life.
In addition
, it takes over a hundred years to
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destroy
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only
one
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plastic
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bag
. As we all know, global warming is the biggest problem that humans
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have to
solve as
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soon
as possible.
Sadly
, the
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use
of
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plastic
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bags
is ranked
as the top of the activity that harms the
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environment
. There are
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plenty
of assessments prove that
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plastic
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bag
is not an environmental friendly object.

Therefore
, the prohibition of
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plastic
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bags
is needed
in every country. In fact, there are
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some
countries has taken action for this situation. To illustrate, in Singapore, the customers will have an extra charge for their products if they
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ask for
the
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plastic
carrier. In my opinion, this
is counted
as a
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good
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start
to
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prevent
the overuse of
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plastic
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bag
nowadays. Limited the
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use
of
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plastic
carries not
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only
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helps
humans to save the Earth,
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but
also
gives the
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government
an opportunity to
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reduce
the cost of producing
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plastic
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bags
every year.

To conclude
, banned the
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use
of
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plastic
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bags
is one of the
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important
steps that
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help
humans to protect the Earth.
In addition
, it can
be done
easily
by individuals
as well
. Yes, I admit that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plastic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bags
have made our life easier since the day it
was invented
.
However
, it is time to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
using it to save our nature. I hope that there will be more and more
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
aware of the cons of using
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plastic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bags
in their daily life and take action for it. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
environment
needs our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helps
!
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
31Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS essay Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think they should be banned. v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
340 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
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