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Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea, some think they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree?

Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think they should be banned. v. 2
In this contemporary world, it is undoubtedly true that problems related to plastic products are rising. Apart from that, some people think that due to increase in the percentage of plastic trash and its effect on land and water pollution, plastic must be banned. In my perception, I completely agree with this. The coming paragraphs will shed a light on my point of view. To begin with the explanation, a plethora of reasons can be put forward to bolster my opinion. First and foremost, it is irrefutable that its take centuries to decompose plastic in the land because of the chemicals use in the procedure of making plastic. Moreover, some plastic bags on the open roads may also hazardous to animals. For instance, just one week ago, a news published on Gujarat Samachar displayed that a cow was died due to eating food on the street which was wrapped by plastic. In addition, it is undeniable that the numerous desease spread via water in urban areas. Village areas do not have adequate purifying systems for drinking water. Thus, villagers suffer from stomach infection by drinking polluted water from river directly. And it is scientificaly proven that the main reason behind this water pullution is result from unwanted plastic junks which lay into rivers by public. Also, some restaurants use plastic bags for food delivery. Which mixed toxic chemicals of bag and food together. And eating such type of packed food is not good for our health. Agglomerating, all the discussions done above, I once again clarify that government should make some plastic products illegal as these things are unsafe for human health as well as animals too. Hence, I would like to suggest that to prevent this pollution of plastic we should minimise our usage of plastic and throw this type of materials direct in the dustbins.
In this contemporary world, it is
undoubtedly
true that problems related

to
plastic
products are rising. Apart from that,
some
people
think


that due to increase in the percentage of
plastic
trash and its effect

on land and water pollution,
plastic
must
be banned
. In my perception,

I completely
agree
with this. The coming paragraphs will shed a
light


on
my point of view.

To
begin
with the explanation, a plethora of reasons can
be put


forward to bolster my opinion.
First
and foremost, it is irrefutable

that its take centuries to decompose
plastic
in the land
because


of the chemicals
use
in the procedure of making
plastic
.
Moreover
,

some
plastic
bags on the open roads may
also
hazardous to animals.

For instance
,
just
one week ago,
a news
published on Gujarat
Samachar


displayed that a cow was
died
due to eating food on the street which

was wrapped
by plastic.

In addition
, it is undeniable that the numerous
desease
spread via

water in urban areas. Village areas do not have adequate purifying

systems for drinking water.
Thus
, villagers suffer from stomach

infection by drinking polluted water from river
directly
. And it

is
scientificaly
proven that the main reason behind this
water


pullution
is result from unwanted
plastic
junks which lay into

rivers by public.
Also
,
some
restaurants
use
plastic
bags for

food
delivery. Which mixed toxic chemicals of bag and
food


together
. And eating such type of packed food is not
good


for
our health.

Agglomerating, all the discussions done above, I once again

clarify that
government
should
make
some
plastic
products

illegal
as these things are unsafe for human health
as well


as animals too.
Hence
, I would like to suggest that to
prevent


this pollution of
plastic
we should
minimise
our usage of plastic

and throw this type of materials direct in the dustbins.
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IELTS essay Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea, some think they should be banned.

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14 paragraphs
307 words
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