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In order to study at university students are required to par expensive tuition fees. Not all students can afford then so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.2

Fees for higher education is expensive and not affordable for everyone, so according to some university should be free for all people regardless of their background. In my opinion, I agree that university ought to be free as it will greatly benefit both individual and society. A good reason to abolish university fees is that it gives people whether they rich or poor equal rights. At present, students from a poor background are prevented from entering university because they are unable to afford the fees. This excludes a large proportion of society and is discriminatory which can be avoided by getting rid of tuition fees. Another point to consider is that having no fee at university means that students will no longer have to work to cover their costs, For example, around the three quarters of all students in the UK have to work either full-time or part-time while studying at university to pay their fees. Free higher education should, therefore, produce better result as students will be able to afford to apply themselves to their studies exclusively. Finally, free university education will benefit society in the long run, for the simple reason that it will open up higher education to wider section of the population. This will result in increasing the number of educated people. In other words, having a grater resource of skilled and knowledgeable professionals will bring great reward to society as a whole. Moreover, it can bring more economic advantages to a country that shows itself to be prosperous and leading in various fields. In conclusion, free university education is a must for any country that values equal rights and one that wishes to advance. The cost of free education will be recouped many times over by the benefit it brings,
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ought to be
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as it will
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society
. A
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reason to abolish
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university
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is that it gives
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people
whether they rich or poor equal rights. At present,
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students
from a poor background are
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prevented
from entering
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university
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because
they are unable to afford the
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fees
. This excludes a large proportion of
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society
and is discriminatory which can
be avoided
by getting rid of tuition fees.

Another point to consider is that having no
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fee
at
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university
means that
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students
will no longer
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have to
work to cover their costs,
For example
, around the three quarters of all
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students
in the UK
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have to
work either full-time or part-time while studying at
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university
to pay their
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fees
.
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higher
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should,
therefore
, produce better result as
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students
will be able to afford to apply themselves to their studies exclusively.
Finally
,
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free
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university
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education
will benefit
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society
in the long run, for the simple reason that it will open up higher
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education
to wider section of the population. This will result in increasing the number of educated
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people
.
In other words
, having a grater resource of skilled and knowledgeable professionals will bring great reward to
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society
as a whole.
Moreover
, it can bring more economic advantages to a country that
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shows
itself to be prosperous and leading in various fields.

In conclusion
,
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free
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university
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education
is a
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must
for any country that values equal rights and one that wishes to advance. The cost of
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free
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education
will
be recouped
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many
times over by the benefit it brings,
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IELTS essay In order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all students can afford them, so some people think that university education should be free for everyone.

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