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Plastic Shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. some people think they should be banned do you agree or disagree? v.13

Plastic Shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. some people think they should be banned v. 13
Plastic is one of the non-degradation materials that cause pollution of earth. Some individuals believe that utilizing plastic bags for shopping should be restricted by policy. I completely agree with the given statement on the basis of have been non-degradable and harmful to human and animals. To begin with, the main reason is that being non-degradable is a determining factor when utilizing of plastic is reduced. To put it another way, regardless of cheap price of plastic bag, they are environmentally-damaging and it takes hundreds of years to degrade in soil as if they are non-degradable. Therefore, providing that firm policy is not regulated by government authorities, after several years everywhere are more likely to fill with plastic. A good illustration for this is Take a river full of plastic bags as an example; this would lead to lost breathtaking view of the river as we expected. Thus, the less using of plastics for shopping, the better habitat for living and spectacular place for visiting. Having said that, however, clean environment are not the only factor in this respect, another reason against restricting use plastic is that animals suffer more than human from plastic. Distributing of plastics in habitat is not only cause to have a dirty habitat as well, but they are harmful to animals. A good illustration for this is reported in magazines that many of the animals die annually because of munch on plastic bags. Hence, to better participate in taking care of animals, it is necessary to band plastic bags for shopping. To conclude, I personally take the view that it is ethically unacceptable to pollute habitat by using plastics, which can be replaced by bio-degradable materials such as paper-base bags. It is mainly because plastic is non-degradable, lead to have dirty habitat and can destroy a huge amount of animals.
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Plastic
is one of the non-degradation materials that cause pollution of earth.
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Some
individuals believe that utilizing
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plastic
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bags
for shopping should
be restricted
by policy. I completely
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agree
with the
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given
statement on the basis of have been non-degradable and harmful to human and animals.

To
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begin
with, the main reason is that being non-degradable is a determining factor when utilizing of
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plastic
is
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reduced
. To put it another way, regardless of
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cheap
price of
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plastic
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bag
, they are
environmentally
-damaging and it takes hundreds of years to degrade in soil as if they are non-degradable.
Therefore
, providing that firm policy is not regulated by
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government
authorities, after several years everywhere are more likely to fill with
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plastic
. A
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good
illustration for this is Take a river full of
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plastic
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bags
as an example; this would lead to lost breathtaking view of the river as we
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expected
.
Thus
, the less using of
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plastics
for shopping, the better
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habitat
for living and spectacular place for visiting.

Having said that,
however
, clean environment are not the
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only
factor in this respect, another reason against restricting
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use
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plastic
is that
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animals
suffer more than human from
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plastic
. Distributing of
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plastics
in
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habitat
is not
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only
cause to have a dirty
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habitat
as well
,
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but
they are harmful to
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animals
. A
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good
illustration for this
is reported
in magazines that
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many
of the
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animals
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die
annually
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because
of munch on
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plastic
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bags
.
Hence
, to better participate in taking care of
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animals
, it is necessary to band
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plastic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bags
for shopping.

To conclude
, I
personally
take the view that it is
ethically
unacceptable to pollute
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habitat
by using
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plastics
, which can
be replaced
by bio-degradable materials such as paper-base
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bags
. It is
mainly
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because
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plastic
is non-degradable, lead to have dirty
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habitat
and can
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destroy
a huge amount of
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animals
.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay Plastic Shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. some people think they should be banned v. 13

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
305 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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