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Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think they should be banned. Do you agree or disagree? v.11

Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think they should be banned. v. 11
The use of plastic bags is one of the major causes of environmental pollution. Hence, it is thought that banning plastic shopping bags is a need. I completely agree with this idea and think that the plastic bag ban would reduce the high level pollution of land and sea. Shopping bags which are made of plastic play a primary role in increasing pollution. These plastic materials which are thrown into seas lead to the death of marine creatures. For example, the number of marine mammals has decreased alarmingly in the oceans due to the great level of pollution which result from plastic materials. Furthermore, nearly a hundred of Caretta Caretta is dying per year since they consume plastics for food. Therefore, implementing a ban to bags which is made of plastic for the use of shopping would be beneficial to save marine life. Another justified reason behind such a ban is that plastic material such as shopper bags which contains chemical damage the productivity of agriculture because of affecting negatively the soil quality. Furthermore, this situation is threatening to people’s health because leading to severe health issues such as cancer and blood-related diseases. Instead of using plastic bags, for shoppers, the government should invest and promote the use of paper bags, which are eco-friendly and recyclable. Unless the government bans plastic bags, people will suffer from the lack of healthy agricultural product and have a risk of getting cancer. In conclusion, the shopper bags made of plastic should be banned because they are detrimental to both marine life, and the soil quality, which plays an important role in growing healthy vegetables and fruits. In my opinion, the paper or carton bag usage can be replaced the plastic bags shoppers use.
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is one of the major causes of environmental
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pollution
.
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, it is
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thought
that banning
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plastic
shopping
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is a need. I completely
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agree
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idea
and
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think
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would
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reduce
the high level
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pollution
of land and sea.

Shopping
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bags
which
are made
of
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plastic
play a primary role in increasing
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pollution
. These
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plastic
materials which
are thrown
into seas lead to the death of
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marine
creatures.
For example
, the number of
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marine
mammals has decreased
alarmingly
in the oceans due to the great level of
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pollution
which result from
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plastic
materials.
Furthermore
,
nearly
a hundred of
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Caretta Caretta
is dying per year since they consume
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plastics
for food.
Therefore
, implementing a
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ban
to
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bags
which
is made
of
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plastic
for the
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use
of shopping would be beneficial to save
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marine
life.

Another justified reason behind such a
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ban
is that
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plastic
material such as
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shopper
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bags
which contains chemical damage the productivity of agriculture
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because
of affecting
negatively
the soil quality.
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, this situation is threatening to
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people
’s health
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because
leading to severe health issues such as cancer and blood-related diseases.
Instead
of using
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plastic
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bags
, for
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shoppers
, the
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government
should invest and promote the
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use
of paper
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bags
, which are eco-friendly and recyclable. Unless the
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government
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bans
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,
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people
will suffer from the lack of healthy agricultural product and have a
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risk
of getting cancer.

In conclusion
, the
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shopper
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bags
made of
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plastic
should
be banned
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because
they are detrimental to both
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marine
life, and the soil quality, which plays an
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important
role in growing healthy vegetables and fruits. In my opinion, the paper or carton
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bag
usage can
be replaced
the
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plastic
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bags
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shoppers
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use
.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Plastic shopping bags contribute to the pollution of land and sea. Some people think they should be banned. v. 11

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
290 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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