The world’s population has been increasing rapidly over the years. Some people believe that at present population growth is the largest problem faced by humanity. In this essay, we will discuss both sides of the argument and provide evidence as to why this is the greatest issue faced by us today.
Population growth has contributed to the spread of diseases in densely populated areas. Air borne diseases, travel faster and affect a massive number of people all throughout the region. Third world countries such as Africa lacks the resources to provide treatment to all the affected victims thereby reducing the average life expectancy. If the government implemented policies to tackle the ongoing issue, then there would be an abundance of healthier individuals in those countries. However, this phenomenon also provides us with certain positive aspects.
Advancement in technology is also associated with population increase. Since the industrial revolution, human society has shifted from craft production to machines. Humans have advanced in the medical field with regards to life saving technology. Therefore, life expectancy may be increased by providing a stable food and medical treatments. For instance, mass production of medicines to combat rapidly spreading viruses can reduce the loss of life and maintain human health.
In conclusion, although technological outbreaks have presented a positive outlook onto the on-going problem of population growth. The lack of resources to sustain and maintain human life still remains an issue in various parts of the world. If left unchecked, I agree that the rapidly growing human population will be the largest problem facing humanity.
The world’s
population
has been increasing
rapidly
over the years.
Some
people
believe that at present
population
growth is the largest problem faced by humanity. In this essay, we will discuss both sides of the argument and provide evidence as to why this is the greatest issue faced by us
today
.
Population growth has contributed to the spread of diseases in
densely
populated areas. Air borne diseases, travel faster and affect a massive number of
people
all throughout the region. Third world countries such as Africa lacks the resources to provide treatment to all the
affected
victims thereby reducing the average
life
expectancy. If the
government
implemented policies to tackle the ongoing issue, then there would be an abundance of healthier individuals in those countries.
However
, this phenomenon
also
provides us with certain
positive
aspects.
Advancement in technology is
also
associated with
population
increase. Since the industrial revolution,
human
society has shifted from craft production to machines.
Humans
have advanced in the medical field
with regards to
life
saving technology.
Therefore
,
life
expectancy may
be increased
by providing a stable food and medical treatments.
For instance
, mass production of medicines to combat
rapidly
spreading viruses can
reduce
the loss of
life
and maintain
human
health.
In conclusion
, although technological outbreaks have presented a
positive
outlook onto the
on-going
problem of
population
growth. The lack of resources to sustain and maintain
human
life
still
remains an issue in various parts of the world. If
left
unchecked, I
agree
that the
rapidly
growing
human
population
will be the largest problem facing humanity.
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