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do you agree or disagree? People who develop many different skills are more successful than people just focus on only one skill. v.57

People who develop many different skills are more successful than people just focus on only one skill. v. 57
Waste management is a big concern today, especially when more than 7. 5 billion people produce a staggering amount of garbage each day. Population rise, the popularity of packaged goods, lack of recycling efforts and our throwaway habits are responsible for an unmanageable amount of rubbish produced and the jurisdiction can take some effective steps to control it. To begin with, the world population has crossed 7. 5 billion and it’s only natural that an increasing population produces more rubbish than ever before. Moreover, these days every product is packaged before it is sold. It is so widespread a trend that common products like bananas and apples are packed individually just to make them look attractive to the consumers. Use of plastic, polythene, and many other nondisposable materials make the situation worse as they are not biodegradable. Increasing use of plastic and polythene and its adverse effects on the environment is a global concern. Besides, recycling is a fancy term for many developing and poor countries where it is thought to be a luxury rather than a necessity. As a consequence, we are producing more waste and threatening our environment. Sadly, our consumerism and throwaway habits are making the situation graver as we like to have all the latest products and discard old ones easily. The government can take some measures to curb the increasingly high waste production, which might be tough to implement but once they are in place, it will bring a promising outcome. First, strict laws regarding the use of plastic and polythene should be implemented. No large company like Coca-Cola and Pepsi should be allowed to sell their products in plastic bottles. This single measure can reduce waste production to a certain extent. Moreover, the government should force every household to separately dispose recyclable wastages from another letter so that recycling process becomes easier. Finally, the authority should run awareness campaigns to educate people about the negative consequences of plastic and its usage. To conclude, an ever-increasing population and their consumerism habit primarily produce a huge amount of debris each day and it has already become a global concern. It is hoped that the authority would take effective measures to control it to reduce environmental degradation.
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Waste
management is a
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big
concern
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today
,
especially
when more than 7. 5 billion
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people
produce a staggering amount of garbage each day.
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Population
rise, the popularity of packaged
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goods
, lack of recycling efforts and our throwaway habits are responsible for an unmanageable amount of rubbish produced and the jurisdiction can take
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some
effective steps to control it.

To
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begin
with, the world
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population
has crossed 7. 5 billion and it’s
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only
natural that an increasing
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population
produces more rubbish than ever
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before
.
Moreover
, these days every
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product
is packaged
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before
it
is sold
. It is
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so
widespread a trend that common
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products
like bananas and apples
are packed
individually
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just
to
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make
them look attractive to the consumers.
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Use
of
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plastic
, polythene, and
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many
other
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nondisposable
materials
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make
the situation worse as they are not biodegradable. Increasing
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use
of
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plastic
and polythene and its adverse effects on the environment is a global concern.
Besides
, recycling is a fancy term for
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many
developing and poor countries where it is
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thought
to be a luxury
rather
than a necessity. As a consequence, we are producing more
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waste
and threatening our environment.
Sadly
, our consumerism and throwaway habits are making the situation graver as we like to have all the latest
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products
and discard
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old
ones
easily
.

The
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government
can take
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some
measures to curb the
increasingly
high
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waste
production, which might be tough to implement
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but
once they are in place, it will bring a promising outcome.
First
, strict laws regarding the
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use
of
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plastic
and polythene should
be implemented
. No large
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company
like Coca-Cola and Pepsi should be
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allowed
to sell their
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products
in
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plastic
bottles. This single measure can
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reduce
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waste
production to a certain extent.
Moreover
, the
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government
should force every household to
separately
dispose recyclable
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wastages
from another letter
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so
that recycling process becomes easier.
Finally
, the authority should run awareness campaigns to educate
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people
about the
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negative
consequences of
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plastic
and its usage.

To conclude
, an ever-increasing
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population
and their consumerism habit
primarily
produce a huge amount of debris each day and it has already become a global concern. It
is hoped
that the authority would take effective measures to control it to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
environmental degradation.
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay People who develop many different skills are more successful than people just focus on only one skill. v. 57

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
370 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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