People want their country to host an international sporting events. Other believes that international sporting event bring more problems than benefits. Discuss both the points of view and give your opinion. v.1
People want their country to host an international sporting events. Other believes that international sporting event bring more problems than benefits. v. 1
Nowadays, many people spend much of their time on the Internet, whether in the workplace or as part of leisure time. This medium connects people of different ethnicities to various parts of the world, which provides them with information about different cultures and its life in general. However, some may argue that since all the history of a particular country can be obtained online, why to bother to visit them. I think you cannot compare the feelings and experiences until you visit the country itself.
One can indeed visit online to experience and gain some knowledge of different traditions and cultures, and all without incurring the cost related to visiting these countries, However, having a physical presence and witnessing the actual monuments that cannot be compared with the Internet. For example, looking at images and reading the information on the heritage buildings and its history, might not connect the person on the emotional level, as it would be visiting and experiencing the traditions itself.
On the other hand, many people nowadays struggling with their finances, and this could be hindering them from visiting these cultural and traditional significant monuments. So, in this sense, the Internet could be proven to be their eyes for experiencing the diverse cultures. Besides, these days many young students have an eagerness to learn and understand the traditions, which are different from them, and the Internet platform is one place they can quench their thirst. For instance, many students write their history assignment by searching and reading information on the Internet.
In conclusion, although there are some benefits of the Internet in learning or in understanding the different traditions, however, I think it cannot replace the value and experiences of actually visiting them.
Nowadays,
many
people
spend much of their time on the Internet, whether in the workplace or as part of leisure time. This medium connects
people
of
different
ethnicities to various parts of the world, which provides them with information about
different
cultures and its life
in general
.
However
,
some
may argue that since all the history of a particular country can
be obtained
online, why to bother to visit them. I
think
you cannot compare the feelings and experiences until you visit the country itself.
One can
indeed
visit online to experience and gain
some
knowledge of
different
traditions
and cultures, and all without incurring the cost related to visiting these countries,
However
, having a physical presence and witnessing the actual monuments that cannot
be compared
with the Internet.
For example
, looking at images and reading the information on the heritage buildings and its history, might not connect the person on the emotional level, as it would be visiting and experiencing the
traditions
itself.
On the other hand
,
many
people
nowadays struggling with their finances, and this could be hindering them from visiting these cultural and traditional significant monuments.
So
, in this sense, the Internet could
be proven
to be their eyes for experiencing the diverse cultures.
Besides
, these days
many
young students have an eagerness to learn and understand the
traditions
, which are
different
from them, and the Internet platform is one place they can quench their thirst.
For instance
,
many
students write their history assignment by searching and reading information on the Internet.
In conclusion
, although there are
some
benefits of the Internet in learning or in understanding the
different
traditions
,
however
, I
think
it cannot replace the value and experiences of actually visiting them.
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