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People should work a fixed number or hours per week, and employers should not ask anybody to work more than this. v.1

People should work a fixed number or hours per week, and employers should not ask anybody to work more than this. v. 1
Climate change represents a major threat to life on Earth, it may lead to droughts, floods, forced relocation, and so on. Recent years, political leaders from diverse countries have promised to fight this issue with the international community. In my opinion, rather than struggling with the extreme temperature, people would better find a way to tackle with it. To begin with, surviving in climate change can only address the symptoms rather than solving the problem at the root. I am not optimistic that one could be able to cope with the constant rising in sea levels, which can have devastating effects on coastal habitats farther inland, for example, destructive erosion, flooding and agricultural soil contamination with salt, just list a few. Even though many coastal cities are already planning adaptation measures, often at considerable cost, Such as building sea walls and planting mangroves to absorb water. It is not a long-term policy as the problem of global warming is being exacerbated dramatically by ongoing human activities. We may barely curb the trouble once, how about next time? On the contrary, why we need to live with a difficulty when we can combat this issue with appropriate measures? There are numerous methods to mitigate the complex shift in weather. It is suggested that food waste should be collected and reused as compost to lessen the number of greenhouse gases produced by incinerators. Moreover, restaurants are encouraged to use reusable food containers and cutlery for lunch. A small step from, everyone can make a big adjustment of the Earth. In conclusion, it is clear that we must root out the issue of climate change. Preventing is far more essential than finding a way to live with it.
Climate
change
represents a major threat to life on Earth, it may lead to droughts, floods, forced relocation, and
so
on. Recent years, political leaders from diverse countries have promised to fight this issue with the international community. In my opinion,
rather
than struggling with the extreme temperature,
people
would better find a way to tackle with it.

To
begin
with, surviving in climate
change
can
only
address the symptoms
rather
than solving the problem at the root. I am not optimistic that one could be able to cope with the constant rising in sea levels, which can have devastating effects on coastal habitats farther inland,
for example
, destructive erosion, flooding and agricultural soil contamination with salt,
just
list a few.
Even though
many
coastal cities are already planning adaptation measures,
often
at considerable cost,

Such as building sea walls and planting mangroves to absorb water. It is not a long-term policy as the problem of global warming is
being exacerbated
dramatically
by ongoing human activities. We may
barely
curb the trouble once, how about
next
time?

On the contrary
, why we need to
live
with a difficulty when we can combat this issue with appropriate measures? There are numerous methods to mitigate the complex shift in weather. It
is suggested
that food waste should
be collected
and reused as compost to lessen the number of greenhouse gases produced by incinerators.
Moreover
, restaurants
are encouraged
to
use
reusable food containers and cutlery for lunch. A
small
step from, everyone can
make
a
big
adjustment of the Earth.

In conclusion
, it is
clear
that we
must
root out the issue of climate
change
. Preventing is far more essential than finding a way to
live
with it.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes
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IELTS essay People should work a fixed number or hours per week, and employers should not ask anybody to work more than this. v. 1

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
282 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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