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People often find it difficult to adapt to new situations in their lives. Why do you think this is? What measures can you suggest to make it easier? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words. v.1

People often find it difficult to adapt to new situations in their lives. Why do you think this is? What measures can you suggest to make it easier? v. 1
In today’s modern world, the majority of people believe that they have a great many of problems in their lifetime to get used to unusual occasions. The reason for it is that a plenty of people are used to live ordinary and they fear to change anything in their lifestyle. In my view, reading books and endeavouring to do new things can be solved to make it simpler. I think the most obvious solution is that we have to read books in order to learn how to adapt to new situations inasmuch as there are so many circumstances in books which depend on getting used to unusual conditions. For example, nowadays pandemic is declared by many governments which associated with contagious virus Covid-19. To my mind, the pandemic is a new situation, because government has not announced such an epidemic for a long time. The main rule of this announcement is that people should stay at home. If someone reads the book, which is about the situations of pandemics, it would help them in adapting to the condition easily. In addition to this, they would not panic. Consequently, they would pass the pandemics without harmful stuffs. Therefore, books may be beneficial due to the fact that they have lots of information about everything in order to simply for adapting different conditions. Another approach so as to solve this problem is to try to learn different things and carry out them that are related to getting used to situations. For instance, we should work whole day or we don’t do anything during the day, whether we work out with our muscles or we read book throughout a day. In my opinion, these are a variety of situations. By doing this, we would be able to adapt new stuffs as well as conditions. As a result, getting used to infrequent cases would become simpler. That is why, everybody needs to attempt to study and do various things. In conclusion, reading books and trying to learn novelty would lead to adapt to different occasions simply. These new situations can be exciting, they will cope the problems as long as they do not think about them
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to unusual occasions. The reason for it is that a
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people
are
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used
to
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live
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ordinary and
they fear to
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change
anything in their lifestyle. In my view, reading
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books
and
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endeavouring
to do
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new
things can
be solved
to
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make
it simpler.

I
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think
the most obvious solution is that we
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have to
read
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books
in order to learn how to adapt to
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new
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situations
inasmuch as there are
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so
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many
circumstances in
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books
which depend on getting
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used
to unusual conditions.
For example
, nowadays pandemic
is declared
by
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many
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governments
which associated with contagious virus Covid-19. To my mind, the pandemic is a
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new
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situation
,
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because
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government
has not announced such an epidemic for a long time. The main
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rule
of this announcement is that
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people
should stay at home. If someone reads the
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book
, which is about the
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situations
of
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pandemics
, it would
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help
them in adapting to the condition
easily
.
In addition
to this, they would not panic.
Consequently
, they would pass the
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pandemics
without harmful stuffs.
Therefore
,
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books
may be beneficial due to the fact that they have lots of information about everything in order to
simply
for adapting
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different
conditions.

Another approach
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so as to
solve this problem is to try to learn
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different
things and carry out them that
are related
to getting
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used
to
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situations
.
For instance
, we should work whole
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day or
we don’t do anything during the day, whether we work out with our
Use a comma before 'or' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
muscles or
we read
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book
throughout a day. In my opinion, these are a variety of
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situations
. By doing this, we would be able to adapt
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new
stuffs
as well
as conditions.
As a result
, getting
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used
to infrequent cases would become simpler.
That is
why, everybody needs to attempt to study and do various things.

In conclusion
, reading
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books
and trying to learn novelty would lead to adapt to
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different
occasions
simply
. These
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new
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situations
can be exciting, they will cope the problems as long as they do not
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think
about
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them
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
9Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS essay People often find it difficult to adapt to new situations in their lives. Why do you think this is? What measures can you suggest to make it easier? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
361 words
9
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 9.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 9.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 9.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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