It is a fact that many people especially elderly parents like to stay without changing their lifestyle. This essay will discuss how the generation gap is a growing problem, followed by a discussion of how teaching values is the most viable solution.
One main problem of this is the generation gap why many people do not like to accept the contemporary lifestyle. This is because they are unwilling to give up their traditional and spiritual values and this creates a fear that their kids would forget to follow these beliefs. This results in developing a space amid parents and children, who are likely to be westernized to the modern culture. To illustrate this, in conventional countries such as India, people performing prayers particularly on Tuesdays and Fridays, which are considered as the purest days, have reduced to 39% amongst the younger generation.
The best solution to this is to inculcate the traditional values since their childhood. This would mean that if parents pass on their values by educating the customs and rituals followed by their ancestors to their children, they might continue to their next generation. This will unlikely to have any negative impact on the modern-day lifestyle. For example, 65% of people, who shifted from developing countries, living in the developed countries follow their religious ceremony on special occasions because of being taught about the knowledge of values since their early age.
In conclusion, it may be true that many parents stand firm with the same life because they are orthodox and thereby creating a gap between parents and their children, but if they offspring are taught about the traditional belief, the problem can be alleviated.
It is a fact that
many
people
especially
elderly
parents
like to stay without changing their lifestyle. This essay will discuss how the generation gap is a growing problem, followed by a discussion of how teaching values is the most viable solution.
One main problem of this is the generation gap why
many
people
do not like to accept the contemporary lifestyle. This is
because
they are unwilling to give up their traditional and spiritual values and this creates a fear that their kids would forget to follow these beliefs. This results in developing a space amid
parents
and children, who are likely to be
westernized
to the modern culture. To illustrate this, in conventional countries such as India,
people
performing prayers
particularly
on Tuesdays and Fridays, which
are considered
as the purest days, have
reduced
to 39% amongst the younger generation.
The best solution to this is to inculcate the traditional values since their childhood. This would mean that if
parents
pass on their values by educating the customs and rituals followed by their ancestors to their children, they might continue to their
next
generation. This will unlikely to have any
negative
impact on the modern-day lifestyle.
For example
, 65% of
people
, who shifted from
developing countries
, living in the
developed countries
follow their religious ceremony on special occasions
because
of
being taught
about the knowledge of values since their early age.
In conclusion
, it may be true that
many
parents
stand firm with the same life
because
they are orthodox and thereby creating a gap between
parents
and their children,
but
if
they offspring
are taught
about the traditional belief, the problem can
be alleviated
.
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