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People living in small towns or villages are more satisfied with their lives than those living in big cities. v.1

People living in small towns or villages are more satisfied with their lives than those living in big cities. v. 1
Everything depends on time. Someone vibe that it’s a spoiling when you think for tomorrow plan and more significant to focus on currents. This essay will discuss with reasons in detail and why this is not waiting for a future and provide evidence current planning is superior. First and foremost, any settlement takes to right time doesn't wait for next days. The right choice changes our life, whereas making delay is harmful to many things. For my life example, I had one opportunity going to abroad where is our foreign branch office, but I missed that scope because I told to management, my verdict informs later that point another colleague took benefit. And he is very good compared to here. As a result, if your proper selection the good time, you will succeed. The secondary reason, have a specific strategy with synchronizing over time. At phenomenon pandemic a Coronavirus, which is a burden on the planet. Many countries have under control since their proper real-time strategy. For instance, New Zealand is a successful country because it is plan is present time not wait for the future. In addition, at present most of the nations lockdown and people stay in the home the reason why factory, education, organization and shopping centre, close; however, education sector, such as school, college and university not waiting for future opening whereas, there are started in an online class. Undoubtedly, if you take planning presently then you will achieve to goal. In conclusion, this essay discussed with right time decision and specific strategy in the present and I completely agree with the proposition.
Everything depends on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
. Someone
Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: "vibes".
vibe
that it’s a spoiling when you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
for tomorrow plan and more significant to focus on currents. This essay will discuss with reasons in detail and why this is not waiting for a future and provide evidence
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
planning is superior.

First
and foremost, any settlement takes to right
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
doesn't wait for
next
days. The right choice
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changes
our life, whereas making delay is harmful to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
things. For my life example, I had one opportunity
There isn't usually a preposition before "abroad". Did you mean "going abroad"?
going to abroad
where is our foreign branch office,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I missed that scope
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
to management, my verdict informs later that point another colleague took benefit. And he is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
compared to here.
As a result
, if your proper selection the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
, you will succeed.

The secondary reason, have a specific strategy with synchronizing over
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
. At phenomenon pandemic a Coronavirus, which is a burden on the planet.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Many
countries have under control since their proper real-time strategy.
For instance
, New Zealand is a successful country
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
it is plan is present
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
not wait for the future.
In addition
, at present most of the nations lockdown and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
stay in the home the reason why factory, education, organization and shopping
Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.
centre
, close;
however
, education sector, such as school, college and university not waiting for future opening whereas, there are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
started
in an online
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
.
Undoubtedly
, if you take planning
presently
then you will achieve to goal.

In conclusion
, this essay discussed with right
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
decision and specific strategy in the present and I completely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with the proposition.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay People living in small towns or villages are more satisfied with their lives than those living in big cities. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
267 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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