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People learn in different ways. Some people learn by doing things; other people learn by reading about things; others learn by listening to people talk about things. Which of these methods of learning is best for you? v.2

People learn in different ways. Some people learn by doing things; other people learn by reading about things; others learn by listening to people talk about things. Which of these methods of learning is best for you? v. 2
People learn through their entire lives. Some people prefer to read many books and gain knowledge from them. Others prefer to learn from their own experience. Also, there are people who prefer to learn from others by listening to their advice and analysing their mistakes. For several reasons, which I will mention below, I think that each of these ways to learn new things has many advantages. Personally, I think that the combination of these ways is the best way to learn and gain more knowledge and experience. Undoubtedly, learning by doing things is the best way to learn. First of all, one can gain his own experience, which is priceless and valuable. Moreover, some things are impossible to learn without practising. For example, when children learn how to read they can not perfect in it without everyday practice. Or when a student learn how to type on a computer. He can not just listen to someone or read books about it and then type very quickly. Many things in our life require practice and own experience. Personally, I think that mostly I learn how to do things by doing them not by reading about them. However, there are some things that are impossible to be learned by doing them. For example, students learn many things from the books and other different resources like Internet, magazines, newspapers and even through conversations. Take for example our history or space exploration. People learn about them from books and TV programs. We can not get back in time and experience different historical events except that we do it in our imagination. In conclusion, I think that the combination of these ways will give the best results. However, there is no doubt that personal experience is priceless and irreplaceable because it gives the great opportunity to analyse one's mistakes, make conclusions and avoid them next time. So, in my case, I try to learn things by doing them if it is possible and if it is not then I use other ways to learn them.
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prefer to read
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books
and gain knowledge from them. Others prefer to
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learn
from their
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own
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experience
.
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, there are
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people
who prefer to
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learn
from others by listening to their advice and
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analysing
their mistakes. For several reasons, which I will mention below, I
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think
that each of these
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ways
to
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learn
new things has
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many
advantages.
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, I
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think
that the combination of these
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ways
is the best
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way
to
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learn
and gain more knowledge and experience.

Undoubtedly
, learning by
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doing
things is the best
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way
to
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learn
.
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First of all
, one can gain his
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own
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experience
, which is priceless and valuable.
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,
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some
things are impossible to
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learn
without
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practising
.
For example
, when children
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learn
how to read they can not perfect in it without everyday practice. Or when a student
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learn
how to type on a computer. He can not
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just
listen to someone or read
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books
about it and then type
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very
quickly
.
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Many
things in our life require practice and
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own
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experience
.
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, I
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think
that
mostly
I
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learn
how to do things by
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them not by reading about them.

However
, there are
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some
things that are impossible to
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doing
them.
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, students
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learn
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many
things from the
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books
and
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other
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different
resources like Internet, magazines, newspapers and even through conversations. Take
for example
our history or space exploration.
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People
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learn
about them from
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books
and TV programs. We can not
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get
back in time and
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experience
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different
historical
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events
except that we do it in our imagination.

In conclusion
, I
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think
that the combination of these
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ways
will give the best results.
However
, there is no doubt that personal
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experience
is priceless and irreplaceable
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because
it gives the great opportunity to
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analyse
one's mistakes,
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make
conclusions and avoid them
next
time.
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So
, in my case, I try to
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learn
things by
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doing
them if it is possible and if it is not then I
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use
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other
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ways
to
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learn
them.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
43Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes
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IELTS essay People learn in different ways. Some people learn by doing things; other people learn by reading about things; others learn by listening to people talk about things. Which of these methods of learning is best for you? v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
341 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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