In the last two decades, women have accessed and gained more place in the working market. Consequently, the hours away from home and children have risen incredibly. This amount of time kids are not being taken care by their mothers, is believed by many, that will make young people suffer problems such as increasing their delinquency. In my opinion, being a working woman is not related to juvenile misbehaviour and this essay will explain why.
Primarily, since the 1990´s mothers have been getting jobs at increasing rates, henceforth they are receiving a salary. This income, is not only helping the familiar daily economy, but also allows the access to a private education which is clearly a safer experience for kids. For example, many paid schools have the benefit of full time schedule, keeping children away from the streets. In summary, having a high family income, which is achieved when both parents work, decreases considerably youth crime by accessing to better institutes where children can stay for long hours being educated.
It is important to address that, in spite mothers spend long hours away from home to attend their jobs, it does not mean that they will neglect their children by doing so. Women can manage to do multiple activities and doing them correctly. Mothers can be there for their kids when arriving home, and from work as well. For instance, can leave work to get them from school and take them to extracurricular classes. Not only by driving them, but also by helping them with homeworks and daily decisions, mothers are always taking care of their children. Many women work, and in spite of that, their kids do not end up in jail. This is due to the reason that when at home, mothers transmit family and social values to their sons and daughters continuously.
In conclusion, I disagree with the opinion that the increase in female jobs nowadays, will have a direct consequence in the rise of crime among adolescents. Oppositely, having extra salaries and quality time with children at home can make them happy and keep them away from criminal activities. Alarming as it sounds, staying at home can be disadvantageous for the child raising because life is harder with less money and family environment can become hostile for kids when mothers remain at home all day long.
In the last two decades, women have accessed and gained more place in the working market.
Consequently
, the hours
away
from home and
children
have risen
incredibly
. This amount of time
kids
are not
being taken
care by their mothers,
is believed
by
many
, that will
make
young
people
suffer problems such as increasing their delinquency. In my opinion, being a working woman is not related to juvenile
misbehaviour
and this essay will
explain
why.
Primarily
, since the
1990´s
mothers have been getting jobs at increasing rates, henceforth they are receiving a salary. This income, is not
only
helping the familiar daily economy,
but
also
allows
the access to a private education which is
clearly
a safer experience for
kids
.
For example
,
many
paid schools have the benefit of full time schedule, keeping
children
away
from the streets. In summary, having a high family income, which
is achieved
when both parents
work
, decreases
considerably
youth crime by accessing to better institutes where
children
can stay for long hours
being educated
.
It is
important
to address that, in spite mothers spend long hours
away
from home to attend their jobs, it does not mean that they will neglect their
children
by doing
so
. Women can manage to do multiple activities and doing them
correctly
. Mothers can be there for their
kids
when arriving home, and from
work
as well
.
For instance
, can
leave
work
to
get
them from school and take them to extracurricular classes. Not
only
by driving them,
but
also
by helping them with
homeworks
and daily decisions, mothers are always taking care of their
children
.
Many
women
work
, and
in spite of
that, their
kids
do not
end
up in jail. This is due to the reason that when at home, mothers transmit family and social values to their sons and daughters
continuously
.
In conclusion
, I disagree with the opinion that the increase in female jobs nowadays, will have a direct consequence in the rise of crime among adolescents.
Oppositely
, having extra salaries and quality time with
children
at home can
make
them happy and
keep
them
away
from criminal activities. Alarming as it sounds, staying at home can be disadvantageous for the child raising
because
life is harder with less money and family environment can become hostile for
kids
when mothers remain at home all day long.