It is commonly believed that doing scuba diving and bungee jumping are life-threatening sports. That is why people who are into these should also be the one to save their own lives from danger without asking the help of rescuers. In my own perspective, I disagree that they should not get any help at all.
There are reasons why rescuers should save people who are in danger. One is that it is their duty to save their clients from potential accidents. As per their job description, their main duty is to make sure that their clients are safe at all times. These workers are there to guide and protect the people who are interested in dangerous sports. For instance, an individual who is inclined of trying bungee jumping should be supervised and likewise check the client's capability and health status if they are fit to do this type of sports. This way, they can prevent any future accidents and injuries. Hence, rescuers ought to save people in trouble as this is their duty.
Moreover, workers who are assigned in these unsafe types of sports are well trained. In order for an individual to be good at a certain sport, he should mastered the techniques, which means that these sport's employees are knowledgeable and has undergone special trainings. They know what is best for their clients. For example, in scuba diving, these employees are capable of determining how deep a person can go for diving and when it is safe. Thus, they can prevent a person from potential drowning thereby limiting the chances of risking one's life.
In conclusion, while it is regarded that people who try challenging hobbies should be responsible for their own lives, I believe that everyone should be rescued from danger. Rescuers most particularly can help prevent future injuries as they know very well what can be done.
It is
commonly
believed that doing scuba diving and bungee jumping are life-threatening
sports
.
That is
why
people
who
are into these should
also
be the one to
save
their
own
lives
from
danger
without asking the
help
of
rescuers
. In my
own
perspective, I disagree that they should not
get
any
help
at all.
There are reasons why
rescuers
should
save
people
who
are in
danger
. One is that it is their duty to
save
their clients from potential accidents. As per their job description, their main duty is to
make
sure that their clients are safe at all times. These workers are there to guide and protect the
people
who
are interested
in
dangerous
sports
.
For instance
, an individual
who
is inclined
of trying bungee jumping should
be supervised
and
likewise
check
the client's capability and health status if they
are fit
to do this type of
sports
. This way, they can
prevent
any future accidents and injuries.
Hence
,
rescuers
ought to
save
people
in trouble as this is their duty.
Moreover
, workers
who
are assigned
in these unsafe types of
sports
are
well trained
. In order for an individual to be
good
at a certain
sport
, he should
mastered
the techniques, which means that these sport's employees are knowledgeable and has undergone special trainings. They know what is best for their clients.
For example
, in scuba diving, these employees are capable of determining how deep a person can go for diving and when it is safe.
Thus
, they can
prevent
a person from potential drowning thereby limiting the chances of risking one's life.
In conclusion
, while it
is regarded
that
people
who
try challenging hobbies should be responsible for their
own
lives
, I believe that everyone should
be rescued
from
danger
.
Rescuers
most
particularly
can
help
prevent
future injuries as they know
very
well what can
be done
.
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