As compared to the past decades, it has been observed that people have become shopaholic. People nowadays buy things that are not required but only attracts them. In my opinion it is a negative development not only for individual but for the society as a whole. I shall discuss this phenomenon in more detail with valid arguments and examples.
To begin with, people buying behavior has been adversely affected by the media. Media showcases the products in such an attractive way that It looks appealing and people tend to buy it; irrespective they need it or not. For instance, I saw an ad over television of fruit cutting equipment. I got so fascinated by the advertisement that I bought that product knowing that it was not an essential kitchen item. Thus media has influenced people’s purchasing patterns.
To elucidate my stance further, I would like to mention another important aspect that is the mindset of people to stay on top in terms of buying and spending money. The status symbol and showoff race has encircled people in such a way that they don’t feel reluctant buying expensive and irrelevant items. For instance, in my family, people are racing for buying big television screens. One bought 60 inches and the other family bought 95 inches in a week’s time just to show off that they are richer.
To recapitulate the aforementioned argument, I opine that people have developed inappropriate approach of purchasing unnecessary items in order to be considered rich and super cool. Unfortunately, this dilemma has been taking strength every passing day and we may find people spending their all savings into buying unimportant items for no good reason.
As compared to the past decades, it has
been observed
that
people
have become shopaholic.
People
nowadays
buy
things that are not required
but
only
attracts them. In my opinion it is a
negative
development not
only
for individual
but
for the society as a whole. I shall discuss this phenomenon in more detail with valid arguments and examples.
To
begin
with,
people
buying
behavior has been
adversely
affected
by the media. Media showcases the products in such an attractive way that It looks appealing and
people
tend to
buy
it; irrespective they need it or not.
For instance
, I
saw
an ad over television of fruit cutting equipment. I
got
so
fascinated by the advertisement that I
bought
that product knowing that it was not an essential kitchen
item
.
Thus
media has influenced
people’s
purchasing patterns.
To elucidate my stance
further
, I would like to mention another
important
aspect
that is
the mindset of
people
to stay on top in terms of
buying
and spending money. The status symbol and showoff race has encircled
people
in such a way that they don’t feel reluctant
buying
expensive and irrelevant
items
.
For instance
, in my family,
people
are racing for
buying
big
television screens. One
bought
60 inches
and the other family
bought
95 inches
in a week’s time
just
to
show
off that they are richer.
To recapitulate the aforementioned argument, I opine that
people
have developed inappropriate approach of purchasing unnecessary
items
in order to
be considered
rich and super cool. Unfortunately, this dilemma has been taking strength every passing
day and
we may find
people
spending their all savings into
buying
unimportant
items
for no
good
reason.
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