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People attend colleges or universities increase knowledge extra why do you think people 10 colleges or universitiesYou should give reason for your answer using your own ideas and experience v.2

People attend colleges or universities increase knowledge extra why do you think people 10 colleges or universitiesYou should give reason for your answer using your own ideas and experience v. 2
people Mehndi Kat Android in a college or university to Jatin Sasi educational degree there required to a job or to build a career having a good carrier is one of the main reason people spend their time and colleges or universities but there are other reason as well Karan society and its educational structures are for different then they had been a century back when is self educated person could gain a good career and parents could arrange private uterus to ensure their children' s education but in today' s world colleges and you declare person to have the necessary education to be ready for a job sector and without the certification from colleges and Universities it is almost impossible for someone to get a good job People are going to colleges and universities because this is a most common way of getting the education and they have no alternative as the people of past century at most people are learning in colleges and Universities are getting cancelled ready for the future the sole purpose of a college or university is ensure the proper theoretical and moral education to build the ideal citizen the country needs and this is a system which is supplied by the society and people people who do not have the platter user certificate to get a job either because they have a Career plans or may be blessed and inherited Fortune they go to these education institutes to learn the values ideas knowledge and education they required to be a good human in fact education is a border line between the Savage and a good man and this is another reason this society has adopted the idea of education for all and the education colleges and Universities are the places to get the education in the current age universities because this is a most common way of getting the education and they have no alternative as the people of past century at most people are learning in colleges and Universities are getting cancelled ready for the future the sole purpose of a college or university is ensure the proper theoretical and moral education to build the ideal citizen the country needs and this is a system which is supplied by the society and people people who do not have the platter user certificate to get a job either because they have a Career plans or may be blessed and inherited Fortune they go to these education institutes to learn the values ideas knowledge and education they required to be a good human in fact education is a border line between the Savage and a good man and this is another reason this society has adopted the idea of education for all and the education colleges and Universities are the places to get the education in the current age Some people go to universities to get further education to enhance their origin or to improve their job position and salary others go to colleges and University CAT they are educated funny this may seem but many people simply considered the higher education as a status the required to get a higher position in the society colleges and Universities nowadays offers specialised courses like technical courses of little causes and many people attend those courses happy because of their pure interest on the subject or to gain the knowledge they need they are educated funny this may seem but many people simply considered the higher education as a status the required to get a higher position in the society colleges and Universities nowadays offers specialised courses like technical courses of little causes and many people attend those courses happy because of their pure interest on the subject or to gain the knowledge they need opinion getting the education learning new things experiencing diverse cultures and Customs getting prepared for the future career in improving job positions check metal interests and social status of the main reason for people to 10 colleges and Universities
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people
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Mehndi
Kat Android in a college or
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university
to
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Jatin
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Sasi
educational degree there
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required
to a
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job
or to build a
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career
having a
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good
carrier is one of the main
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reason
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people
spend their time and colleges or
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universities
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but
there are other
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reason
as well
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Karan
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society
and its educational structures are for
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different
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then
they had been a century back when is self educated person could gain a
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good
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career
and parents could arrange private uterus to ensure their
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children&
#039; s
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education
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but
in
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today&
#039; s world colleges and you declare person to have the necessary
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education
to be ready for a
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job
sector and without the certification from colleges and
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Universities
it is almost impossible for someone to
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get
a
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good
job

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People
are going to colleges and
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universities
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because
this is a most common way of getting the
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education and
they have no alternative as the
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people
of past century at most
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people
are learning in colleges and
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Universities
are getting cancelled ready for the future the sole purpose of a college or
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university
is
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ensure
the proper theoretical and moral
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education
to build the ideal citizen the country needs and this is a system which
is supplied
by the
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society
and
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people
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people
who do not have the platter user certificate to
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get
a
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job
either
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because
they have a
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Career
plans or may
be blessed
and inherited Fortune they go to these
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education
institutes to learn the values
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ideas
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knowledge
and
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education
they
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required
to be a
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good
human in fact
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education
is a border line between the Savage and a
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good
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man
and this is another
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reason
this
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society
has adopted the
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idea
of
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education
for all and the
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education
colleges and
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Universities
are the places to
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get
the
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education
in the
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current
age

universities
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because
this is a most common way of getting the
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education and
they have no alternative as the
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people
of past century at most
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
are learning in colleges and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Universities
are getting cancelled ready for the future the sole purpose of a college or
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
university
is
Consider using a past participle here: "ensured".
ensure
the proper theoretical and moral
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
to build the ideal citizen the country needs and this is a system which
is supplied
by the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
and
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people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
who do not have the platter user certificate to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
either
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they have a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Career
plans or may
be blessed
and inherited Fortune they go to these
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education
institutes to learn the values
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ideas
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knowledge
and
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education
they
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required
to be a
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good
human in fact
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education
is a border line between the Savage and a
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good
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man
and this is another
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reason
this
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society
has adopted the
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idea
of
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education
for all and the
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education
colleges and
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Universities
are the places to
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get
the
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education
in the
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current
age

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Some
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people
go to
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universities
to
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get
further
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education
to enhance their origin or to
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improve
their
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job
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position
and salary others go to colleges and
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University
CAT they
are educated
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funny
this may seem
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but
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many
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people
simply
considered the higher
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education
as a status the
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required
to
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get
a higher
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position
in the
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society
colleges and
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Universities
nowadays offers
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specialised
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courses
like technical
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courses
of
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little
causes and
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many
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people
attend those
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courses
happy
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because
of their pure interest on the subject or to gain the
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knowledge
they need

they
are educated
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funny
this may seem
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
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people
simply
considered the higher
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
as a status the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
required
to
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get
a higher
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
position
in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
society
colleges and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Universities
nowadays offers
Possible spelling mistake. 'specialised' is British English.
specialised
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
courses
like technical
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
courses
of
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little
causes and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
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people
attend those
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courses
happy
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because
of their pure interest on the subject or to gain the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
knowledge
they need opinion getting the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
education
learning new things experiencing diverse cultures and Customs getting prepared for the future
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career
in improving
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job
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positions
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check
metal interests and social status of the main
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reason
for
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people
to 10 colleges and
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Universities
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
106Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Mistakes

IELTS essay People attend colleges or universities increase knowledge extra why do you think people 10 colleges or universitiesYou should give reason for your answer using your own ideas and experience v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
666 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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