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People are never satisfied with what they have, they always want something more or something different. Use specific reasons to support your answer. v.3

People are never satisfied with what they have, they always want something more or something different. Use specific reasons to support your answer. v. 3
Now a days due to globalisation world changed a lot. People are getting closer using technology still they are not satisfied with what they have. From decade to decade we are improving ourselves more and more but we are not satisfied we want something more. In society people are not satisfied with one home and one car. For example if they have small car they will dream for big car n big bungalow. In that case for making houses people are cutting trees, indirectly it is affecting to enviorment. Hence to prove the statement best example is temprature increased in worldwide by two degree celcious. In my opinion dream should not have limit but if these are not affecting to. By keeping this thing in mind we should grow up and stay happy with what we have.
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Now a days
due to
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globalisation
world
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changed
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People
are getting closer using technology
still
they are not satisfied with what they have. From decade to decade we are improving ourselves more and more
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but
we are not satisfied we want something more.

In society
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people
are not satisfied with one home and one car.
For example
if they have
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small
car they will dream for
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big
car n
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big
bungalow.
In that case
for making
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houses
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people
are cutting trees,
indirectly
it is affecting to
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enviorment
.
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Hence
to prove the
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statement best
example is
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temprature
increased in worldwide by two degree
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celcious
.

In my opinion dream should not have limit
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but
if these are not affecting to. By keeping this thing in mind we should grow up and stay happy with what we have.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes

IELTS essay People are never satisfied with what they have, they always want something more or something different. Use specific reasons to support your answer. v. 3

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
137 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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