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Parents are the best teachers, Usespecific reasons and examples tosupport your answer. You shouldgive reasons for your answer usingyour own ideas and experience. v.1

Parents are the best teachers, Usespecific reasons and examples tosupport your answer. You should v. 1
Whether parents are our best teachers or not - is a never-ending debate and people are divided both in favour and against this argument. Both have a very strong contribution and influence on the learning of a child, but in my opinion parents overtake the teachers in terms of teaching their children. First of all I would like to point out that a teacher is not merely a person who takes a text book and read texts from there to a student. Rather a teacher is someone who devotes his/ her times to teach someone everything that someone needs to know to advance to next step. Morality, intricacies of life, subject matter knowledge, art, science, history, value of time etc. are something that can not be taught through academic books and a good teacher is someone who teaches someone these all. Now that we know the true responsibility of a teacher, we can easily compare our parents and teachers. The things that we learn from our parents are far more important than what we learn from our teachers. I am not denying the invaluable knowledge we learn from our teachers through our academic years, but what we learn from our parents are incomparable. We learn to survive, talk, and distinguish well from bad, values of life, morality and such important other things from our parents. We are the true reflection of our parents and our characters are shaped from their personality and behaviours. Later the teachers help us to enhance our knowledge, horizon and our view of life but the very foundation and ground are made by our parents. The parents sacrifice so many things of their life just to ensure a better life for us and nothing in this whole world could even be compared with their sacrifice for us, Think of student who is unable to pay his/her monthly school fees would be cast away from the school and the beloved teachers would scarcely be there to help him/her. On the other hand the parents would always be there with their every possible effort to help the child. In summary, the things we learn from our teachers are important for our lives and with those valuable lessons and knowledge we prepare for the future but the things we learn from our parents shapes who we are, who we become and their contribution is much more important compared to the contribution of the traditional academic teachers and that is why in my opinion parents are best teachers.
Whether
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parents
are our best
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teachers
or not -

is a never-ending debate and
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people
are divided
both in
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favour
and against this

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argument
. Both have a
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very
strong
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contribution


and influence on the learning of a child,
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but
in

my opinion
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parents
overtake the
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teachers
in

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terms
of teaching their children.

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First of all
I would like to point out that a

teacher is not
merely
a person
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who
takes a text

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book
and read texts from there to a student.

Rather
a
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teacher
is someone
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who
devotes his/

her times to teach someone everything that

someone needs to know to advance to
next


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step
. Morality, intricacies of
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life
,
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subject matter


knowledge, art, science, history, value of time

etc. are something that can not
be taught


through academic books and a
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good
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teacher
is

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someone
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who
teaches someone these all.

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Now
that we know the true responsibility of a

teacher, we can
easily
compare our parents

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and
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teachers
. The things that we
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learn
from
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our


parents are far more
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important
than what we

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learn
from our
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teachers
. I
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am not denying
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the


invaluable knowledge we
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learn
from our

teachers through our academic years,
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but
what

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we
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learn
from our
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parents
are incomparable.

We
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learn
to survive, talk, and distinguish well

from
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bad
, values of
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life
, morality and such

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important
other things from our
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parents
. We
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are


the true reflection of our
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parents
and our

characters
are shaped
from their personality

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and
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behaviours
. Later the
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teachers
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help
us
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to


enhance our knowledge, horizon and our view

of
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life
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but
the
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very
foundation and ground are

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made
by our parents.

The
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parents
sacrifice
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so
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many
things of their

life
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just
to ensure a better
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life
for us and nothing

in this whole world could even
be compared


with their sacrifice for us,
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Think
of student who

is unable to pay his/her monthly school fees

would
be cast
away from the school and the

beloved
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teachers
would
scarcely
be there to

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help
him/her.
On the other hand
the
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parents


would always be there with their every possible

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effort
to
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help
the child.

In summary, the things we
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learn
from our

teachers are
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important
for our
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lives
and with

those valuable lessons and knowledge we

prepare for the future
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but
the things we learn

from our
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parents
shapes
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who
we are,
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who
we

become and their contribution is much more

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important
compared to the contribution of the

traditional academic
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teachers
and
that is
why in

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my
opinion
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parents
A determiner is probably missing here: "are the best".
are best
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teachers
.
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
26Mistakes
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IELTS essay Parents are the best teachers, Usespecific reasons and examples tosupport your answer. You should v. 1

Essay
  American English
54 paragraphs
418 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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