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Parents are the best teachers, Usespecific reasons and examples tosupport your answer. You shouldgive reasons for your answer usingyour own ideas and experience. v.1

Parents are the best teachers, Usespecific reasons and examples tosupport your answer. You should v. 1
Whether parents are our best teachers or not - is a never-ending debate and people are divided both in favour and against this argument. Both have a very strong contribution and influence on the learning of a child, but in my opinion parents overtake the teachers in terms of teaching their children. First of all I would like to point out that a teacher is not merely a person who takes a text book and read texts from there to a student. Rather a teacher is someone who devotes his/ her times to teach someone everything that someone needs to know to advance to next step. Morality, intricacies of life, subject matter knowledge, art, science, history, value of time etc. are something that can not be taught through academic books and a good teacher is someone who teaches someone these all. Now that we know the true responsibility of a teacher, we can easily compare our parents and teachers. The things that we learn from our parents are far more important than what we learn from our teachers. I am not denying the invaluable knowledge we learn from our teachers through our academic years, but what we learn from our parents are incomparable. We learn to survive, talk, and distinguish well from bad, values of life, morality and such important other things from our parents. We are the true reflection of our parents and our characters are shaped from their personality and behaviours. Later the teachers help us to enhance our knowledge, horizon and our view of life but the very foundation and ground are made by our parents. The parents sacrifice so many things of their life just to ensure a better life for us and nothing in this whole world could even be compared with their sacrifice for us, Think of student who is unable to pay his/her monthly school fees would be cast away from the school and the beloved teachers would scarcely be there to help him/her. On the other hand the parents would always be there with their every possible effort to help the child. In summary, the things we learn from our teachers are important for our lives and with those valuable lessons and knowledge we prepare for the future but the things we learn from our parents shapes who we are, who we become and their contribution is much more important compared to the contribution of the traditional academic teachers and that is why in my opinion parents are best teachers.
Whether
parents
are our best
teachers
or not -

is a never-ending debate and
people
are divided
both in
favour
and against this

argument
. Both have a
very
strong
contribution


and influence on the learning of a child,
but
in

my opinion
parents
overtake the
teachers
in

terms
of teaching their children.

First of all
I would like to point out that a

teacher is not
merely
a person
who
takes a text

book
and read texts from there to a student.

Rather
a
teacher
is someone
who
devotes his/

her times to teach someone everything that

someone needs to know to advance to
next


step
. Morality, intricacies of
life
,
subject matter


knowledge, art, science, history, value of time

etc. are something that can not
be taught


through academic books and a
good
teacher
is

someone
who
teaches someone these all.

Now
that we know the true responsibility of a

teacher, we can
easily
compare our parents

and
teachers
. The things that we
learn
from
our


parents are far more
important
than what we

learn
from our
teachers
. I
am not denying
the


invaluable knowledge we
learn
from our

teachers through our academic years,
but
what

we
learn
from our
parents
are incomparable.

We
learn
to survive, talk, and distinguish well

from
bad
, values of
life
, morality and such

important
other things from our
parents
. We
are


the true reflection of our
parents
and our

characters
are shaped
from their personality

and
behaviours
. Later the
teachers
help
us
to


enhance our knowledge, horizon and our view

of
life
but
the
very
foundation and ground are

made
by our parents.

The
parents
sacrifice
so
many
things of their

life
just
to ensure a better
life
for us and nothing

in this whole world could even
be compared


with their sacrifice for us,
Think
of student who

is unable to pay his/her monthly school fees

would
be cast
away from the school and the

beloved
teachers
would
scarcely
be there to

help
him/her.
On the other hand
the
parents


would always be there with their every possible

effort
to
help
the child.

In summary, the things we
learn
from our

teachers are
important
for our
lives
and with

those valuable lessons and knowledge we

prepare for the future
but
the things we learn

from our
parents
shapes
who
we are,
who
we

become and their contribution is much more

important
compared to the contribution of the

traditional academic
teachers
and
that is
why in

my
opinion
parents
are best
teachers
.
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IELTS essay Parents are the best teachers, Usespecific reasons and examples tosupport your answer. You should v. 1

Essay
  American English
54 paragraphs
418 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
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