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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. You should write at least 250 words. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience. v.2

Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. You should v. 2
It is argued that caregivers are the most effective educators. This essay agrees that the best lessons are given by parents. Firstly, this essay will talk about parents as role model and secondly, it will discuss knowing what is best. The main reason why parents are the best teachers is children often look up to them as examples for their behaviours. Kids constantly observe their parents and emulate certain actions in order to practice them in real life. In other words, children are more likely to listen to their parents than teachers or other people because they perceive them to be more reliable. For instance, although infants have low sense of awareness, they tend to mimic whatever their mother says and do because they always interpret is as a good behaviour. In addition, most parents are more aware of whether or not a thing is suitable for their children. Parents, especially mothers, have a very strong connection to their offsprings because they are together from the first day of the children's existence. In this way, an appropriate lesson can be given without disserving the child child as it is instilled by a thoughtful parent. Bullying is a great example for this, even though teachers witness the incident first-hand and parents only hear stories, they are more familiar to what the children are going through because of the time spent with each other and therefore are more likely to give the best advice possible. In conclusion, the best education is given by parents because they are seen as an inspiration by their offsprings and also because they can tell more about what is essential and what is not.
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that caregivers are the most effective educators. This essay
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agrees
that the
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best
lessons are
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given
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parents
.
Firstly
, this essay will talk about
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parents
as role model and
secondly
, it will discuss knowing what is best.

The main reason why
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parents
are the
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best
teachers is
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children
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often
look up to them as examples for their
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behaviours
. Kids
constantly
observe their
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parents
and emulate certain actions in order to practice them in real life.
In other words
,
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children
are more likely to listen to their
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parents
than teachers or other
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people
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because
they perceive them to be more reliable.
For instance
, although infants have low sense of awareness, they tend to mimic whatever their mother says and do
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because
they always interpret is as a
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good
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behaviour
.

In addition
, most
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parents
are more aware of
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whether or not
a thing is suitable for their
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children
.
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Parents
,
especially
mothers, have a
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very
strong connection to their
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offsprings
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because
they are together from the
first
day of the children's existence. In this way, an appropriate lesson can be
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given
without
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disserving
the
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child child
as it
is instilled
by a thoughtful
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parent
. Bullying is a great example for this,
even though
teachers witness the incident
first
-hand and
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parents
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only
hear stories, they are more familiar to what the
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children
are going through
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because
of the time spent with each other and
therefore
are more likely to give the
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best
advice possible.

In conclusion
, the
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best
education is
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given
by
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parents
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because
they are
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seen
as an inspiration by their
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offsprings
and
also
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because
they can
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tell
more about what is essential and what is not.
16Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
18Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. You should v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
277 words
6
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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