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Paper books are and will always be superior to e-books. Discuss the advantages or disadvantages of e-books with regards to this statement. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations. Write between 200 an v.1

Paper books are and will always be superior to e-books. Discuss the advantages or disadvantages of e-books with regards to this statement. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations. Write between 200 an v. 1
Since the beginning of the 21st century, the spread of e-books has increased significantly, where people have altered from reading the paper books to reading the e-books. Some people believe that e-books provide a great benefit rather than the traditional paper books, while others argue that e-books sometimes are inaccurate which reflect negatively on the readers. This essay will discuss the advantage and disadvantage of e-books. E-books are very useful because they enable people to find their needs very fast. Nowadays, searching for any article using a computer can be done within a few seconds, which could not be affordable using the paper books. Recent research, which was conducted in the Cambridge University, has shown that 90% of American prefer using e-books rather than using paper books because they provide the required information very fast. Therefore, it seems clear that e-books help the users obtain the needed information faster than paper books which presents a great benefit. On the other hand, using e-books may provide a false information. Internet now is showing a wide spread of knowledge which could be true or false, Adopting e-books as a resource for obtaining information could lead to a wrong information. Recent research, which was conducted in the Cambridge University, has shown the 34% of the information exists on the internet are false and should not be adopted. Thus, e-books may not be accurate source for the information. In conclusion, this essay discussed the advantages and disadvantages of using e-books as an alternative to paper books. In my opinion, I am inclined to believe that the advantages which are provided by e-books are greater than the disadvantages.
Since the beginning of the 21st century, the spread of e-books has increased
significantly
, where
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people
have altered from reading the paper
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books
to reading the e-books.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
believe that e-books provide a great benefit
rather
than the traditional paper
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
, while others argue that e-books
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
sometimes
are inaccurate which reflect
negatively
on the readers. This essay will discuss the advantage and disadvantage of e-books.

E-books are
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very
useful
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because
they enable
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
to find their needs
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
. Nowadays, searching for any article using a computer can
be done
within a few seconds, which could not be affordable using the paper
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
. Recent research, which
was conducted
in the Cambridge University, has shown that 90% of American prefer using e-books
rather
than using paper
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they provide the required
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
.
Therefore
, it seems
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
that e-books
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
the users obtain the needed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
faster than paper
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
which presents a great benefit.

On the other hand
, using e-books may provide a false
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
. Internet
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
is showing a wide spread of knowledge which could be true or false, Adopting e-books as a resource for obtaining
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
could lead to a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
wrong
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
. Recent research, which
was conducted
in the Cambridge University, has shown the 34% of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
information
exists on the internet are false and should not
be adopted
.
Thus
, e-books may not be accurate source for the information.

In conclusion
, this essay discussed the advantages and disadvantages of using e-books as an alternative to paper
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
. In my opinion, I
am inclined
to believe that the advantages which
are provided
by e-books are greater than the disadvantages.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
12Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes

IELTS essay Paper books are and will always be superior to e-books. Discuss the advantages or disadvantages of e-books with regards to this statement. Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations. Write between 200 an v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
273 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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