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Older people often say the life was better in the past than it s now Do you think it is right or wrong Give your reasons and provide relevant examples v.1

Older people often say the life was better in the past than it s now Do you think it is right or wrong Give your reasons and provide relevant examples v. 1
Dear Tasmina, I hope this letter finds you well. Thank you for your note, and it is always great to hear from you. I am writing this letter to ask you for your guidance in preparing a website. I could not think of anyone else fir this and I know that you'll be the best person to contact to for this situation. Let me elaborate further about the website, for instance, it is solely for medical students and professionals. Moreover, it will be including my research, articles and courses which I am planning to conduct. In addition to this, a description of my background and my experience and various methods to cope up with severe cases and situations. There is no rush to it, and so I think a month would suffice, probably the first week of May 2020. The reason for this is before publishing it, I’ll be needing to do some trials to check if there is anything to add or delete any points or segments, and so I don’t want to ruin anything by. I have planned this for the past two years, and have been saving and arranging my data altogether since then. Furthermore, I always had the exertion to help and share my experiences with everyone. Additionally, this site would also show them the solutions to rectify certain issues, as well as it would be a platform for me to learn more. I hope you could assist and guide me. I would always be grateful for this. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Take care. Best wishes, Shakib
Dear
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Tasmina
,

I hope this letter finds you well. Thank you for your note, and it is always great to hear from you.

I am writing this letter to ask you for your guidance in preparing a website. I could not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
of anyone else fir this and I know that you'll be the best person to contact to for this situation.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
me elaborate
further
about the website,
for instance
, it is
solely
for medical students and professionals.
Moreover
, it will be including my research, articles and courses which I am planning to conduct.
In addition
to this, a description of my background and my experience and various methods to cope up with severe cases and situations.

There is no rush to it, and
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so
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
a month would suffice,
probably
the
first
week of May 2020.
The reason for this is
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before
publishing it, I’ll
The verb 'needing' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
be needing
to do
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some
trials to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
if there is anything to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
or delete any points or segments, and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I don’t want to ruin anything by.

I have planned this for the past two years, and have been saving and arranging my data altogether since then.
Furthermore
, I always had the exertion to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
and share my experiences with everyone.
Additionally
, this site would
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
them the solutions to rectify certain issues,
as well
as it would be a platform for me to learn more. I hope you could assist and guide me. I would always be grateful for this.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am looking forward to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Take care.

Best wishes,

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Shakib
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7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Older people often say the life was better in the past than it s now Do you think it is right or wrong Give your reasons and provide relevant examples v. 1

Essay
  American English
9 paragraphs
265 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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