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Listening M: Hey Janet. You look a little worried; is anything wrong? W: Well, kind of. I just got a letter telling me I was accepted to my top-choice grad school. M: Uh. . . what’s wrong with that? W: Nothing. It’s really great. Don’t get me wrong. v.1

Listening M: Hey Janet. You look a little worried; is anything wrong? W: Well, kind of. I just got a letter telling me I was accepted to my top-choice grad school. M: Uh. . . what’s wrong with that? W: Nothing. It’s really great. Don’t get me wrong. v. 1
The new generation popularly known as 'The Millennials" widely vary in view of ideas and manner when compared to their parents and grandparents. The difference in views and the problems associated with it will be further discussed in this essay. To begin with, people nowadays are comfort and thrill seekers, therefore they think and make decisions accordingly, which is not acceptable by older people. Their goals and aspirations are unrealistic and lack stability, for this reason they take up jobs like blogger, food and movie critics. Furthermore, the millennials are more extrovert and have a liberal approach to life, thus enabling them to view society on a different angle. They accept people for who they are and are more empathetic when compared to the previous generation. For instance, the Indian government in 2009, changed the law saying that homosexual relationships are not a crime anymore, it was wholeheartedly accepted by the new generation, while being scorned by the elder peers. These liberal and sympathetic attitude of the millennials does come with their share of difficulties. Firstly, the arrogant demeanour of the youth do not heed the advice of their experienced parents and are becoming more rebellious than ever. Such attitude will lead to destruction of both the person and public. To exemplify, the"I do not care what others think"behaviour destroys one's personality in front of the community. Some social etiquette needs to be practised by the millennials in order to survive as a unit in society. Secondly, having a more liberal approach towards life, would have repercussions later on. Accepting all means of anti-social behaviour into the society will lead to a state of breaking the moral stance in public. In conclusion, the youth and elderly vary in views and attitude. This difference may be thought as advantageous for the millennials, but do carry it shares of repercussions later on in life
The new generation
popularly
known as 'The Millennials
"
widely
vary in
view
of
ideas
and manner when compared to their parents and grandparents. The difference in
views
and the problems associated with it will be
further
discussed in this essay.

To
begin
with,
people
nowadays are comfort and thrill seekers,
therefore
they
think
and
make
decisions
accordingly
, which is not acceptable by older
people
. Their goals and aspirations are unrealistic and lack stability,
for this reason
they take up jobs like blogger, food and movie critics.
Furthermore
, the millennials are more extrovert and have a liberal approach to life,
thus
enabling them to
view
society on a
different
angle. They accept
people
for who they are and are more empathetic when compared to the previous generation.
For instance
, the Indian
government
in 2009,
changed
the law saying that homosexual relationships are not a crime anymore, it was
wholeheartedly
accepted
by the new generation, while
being scorned
by the elder peers.

These liberal and sympathetic attitude of the millennials does
come
with their share of difficulties.
Firstly
, the arrogant
demeanour
of the youth do not heed the advice of their experienced parents and are becoming more rebellious than ever. Such attitude will lead to destruction of both the person and public. To exemplify, the
"
I do not care what others
think
"
behaviour
destroys
one's personality in front of the community.
Some
social etiquette needs to be
practised
by the millennials in order to survive as a unit in society.
Secondly
, having a more liberal approach towards life, would have repercussions later on. Accepting all means of anti-social
behaviour
into the society will lead to a state of breaking the moral stance in public.

In conclusion
, the youth and elderly vary in
views
and attitude. This difference may be
thought
as advantageous for the millennials,
but
do carry it shares of repercussions later on in
life
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Listening M: Hey Janet. You look a little worried; is anything wrong? W: Well, kind of. I just got a letter telling me I was accepted to my top-choice grad school. M: Uh. . . what’s wrong with that? W: Nothing. It’s really great. Don’t get me wrong. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
311 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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