It goes without saying that everyone wants to make the earth a better place. Some people think that the council should spend as much payment as possible to develop or purchase machine technology. On the other hand, some believe that this currency should be spent on more basic needs. Despite all these, I think our legislature should spend our tax dollars on more fundamental items before it gets into the business of developing network technique.
Remembering the pyramid of needs, is it true that people could be better if they met their primary needs? The council should spend wealth, which actually belongs to the nationality to meet their main needs, rather than the administration thinks it is better. Since everybody has different wants, buying or improving technology can't make everyone happy. Nevertheless, so very universally are the main needs, such a person wants to meet these key needs. This is the right of the tribe to the court to pay a payment because of these governments only manage it.
For instance, many poverty has to live in the worst conditions of a country. Some have to stay in places where they don't live. In addition, a huge amount of children cannot go to school, or they have to travel very far to reach school. Besides, I think the government should donate some money to develop their lives.
All things considered, it might safely be said that if the government invests as much basic needs as possible, people around the world can live an excellent life. Notwithstanding, people can't have excellent computer technology, they will be happier after solving the big troubles in the world.
It goes without saying that everyone wants to
make
the earth a better place.
Some
people
think
that the council should spend as much payment as possible to develop or
purchase
machine technology.
On the other hand
,
some
believe that this currency should
be spent
on more basic
needs
. Despite all these, I
think
our legislature should spend our tax dollars on more fundamental items
before
it
gets
into the business of developing network technique.
Remembering the pyramid of
needs
, is it true that
people
could be better if they met their primary
needs
? The council should spend wealth, which actually belongs to the nationality to
meet
their main
needs
,
rather
than the administration
thinks
it is better. Since everybody has
different
wants, buying or improving technology can't
make
everyone happy.
Nevertheless
,
so
very
universally
are the main
needs
, such a person wants to
meet
these key
needs
. This is the right of the tribe to the court to pay a payment
because
of these
governments
only
manage it.
For instance
,
many poverty
has to
live
in the worst conditions of a country.
Some
have to
stay in places where they don't
live
.
In addition
, a huge amount of children cannot go to school, or they
have to
travel
very
far to reach school.
Besides
, I
think
the
government
should donate
some
money to develop their
lives
.
All things considered, it might
safely
be said
that if the
government
invests as much basic
needs
as possible,
people
around the world can
live
an excellent life. Notwithstanding,
people
can't have excellent computer technology, they will be happier after solving the
big
troubles in the world.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes