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now a days advance in technology and traslation software people no longer need to learn new languages to communicate to what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement v.1

now a days advance in technology and traslation software people no longer need to learn new languages to communicate with this statement v. 1
Nowadays, its becoming necessity to live in metros. Many people are migrating from nearby towns and villages to modern cities in search of jobs and better education. However, there are many concerns about pollution and other problems in cities. In this essay, I will discuss some reasons why living in metros is important and some of the challenges to be overcome. Let's begin by looking at the positives of living in city townships. One of the main advantages is that it broadens your horizons. What I mean by this is that you have more opportunities to meet different people from different customs and traditions. It helps in understanding the society to high extent. Secondly, large metropolis often offers a high standard of living. For example, people who are dreaming about the good job migrate to cities. They even earn more compared to their past village jobs or agriculture. Additionally, standard education is also available increasing their career prospects. Turning on to the other side of the argument, pollution is the major concern in developing suburbs. Metropolis with all kinds of heavy industries and constructions release high levels of bad gases making human habitation unsafe. Moreover, there are heavy traffic congestions in metros. Another major drawback in city living is congestion. In other words, people live or travel very near to each other which is not good. Due to less space in suburbs, there are almost no parks or gardens to exercise or relax. All things considered, living in large cities is lavish yet uncomfortable. In spite of the fact that they offer good living conditions, cities also provide modern problems. In my opinion, positives in the form of education and employment overweigh all the negatives.
Nowadays, its becoming necessity to
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live
in metros.
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Many
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people
are migrating from nearby towns and villages to modern
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cities
in search of jobs and better education.
However
, there are
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many
concerns about pollution and
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other
problems in
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cities
. In this essay, I will discuss
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some
reasons why
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living
in metros is
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important
and
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some of the
challenges to
be overcome
.

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Let
's
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begin
by looking at the positives of
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living
in city townships. One of the main advantages is that it broadens your horizons. What I mean by this is that you have more opportunities to
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meet
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different
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people
from
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different
customs and traditions. It
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helps
in understanding the society to high extent.
Secondly
, large metropolis
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often
offers a high standard of
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living
.
For example
,
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people
who are dreaming about the
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good
job migrate to
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cities
. They even earn more compared to their past village jobs or agriculture.
Additionally
, standard education is
also
available increasing their career prospects.

Turning on to the
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other
side of the argument, pollution is the major concern in developing suburbs. Metropolis with all kinds of heavy industries and constructions release high levels of
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bad
gases making human habitation unsafe.
Moreover
, there are heavy traffic congestions in metros. Another major drawback in city
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living
is congestion. In
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other
words,
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people
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live
or travel
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very
near to each
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other
which is not
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good
. Due to less space in suburbs, there are almost no parks or gardens to exercise or relax.

All things considered,
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living
in large
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cities
is lavish
yet
uncomfortable.
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In spite of
the fact that they offer
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good
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living
conditions,
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cities
also
provide modern problems. In my opinion, positives in the form of education and employment
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overweigh
all the negatives.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay now a days advance in technology and traslation software people no longer need to learn new languages to communicate with this statement v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
285 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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