Present technology makes a lot of people communicate with others has not same the past. This essay agrees that smartphone and internet affected the family relationship in positive ways.
Initially, today people are living in the digital age, which connects with each other around the world is convenience. Especially Family members can have easy ways to contact more than before because they can use a mobile application on their smartphone to make live video calls to another person in their family anytime anywhere. For example, Thai people are commonly used mobile application called “LINE” for communication at present, it is very simple, while family members can connect together when their mobile connection to the internet.
In the past communication between people who are not in the same place is difficult, whereas nowadays fantastic technology makes it easier, this was a positive development in the people interaction. Students who study aboard or workers who work far from their home can stay in touch with their family, they can talk to their parents or their children like face-to-face talking while they are not staying in front of each other. This effect of technology makes people feel happier and also do not feel desolate or depressed when people cannot stay with their family. For instance, my Burmese worker work and stay in Thailand, she can contact with her daughter at Myanmar easily by using the mobile application on her smartphone and internet.
In conclusion, present technology changes the family relationship a lot, it makes family members are closer and happier.
Present
technology
makes
a lot of
people
communicate with others has not same the past. This essay
agrees
that smartphone and internet
affected
the
family
relationship in
positive
ways.
Initially
,
today
people
are living in the digital age, which connects with each other around the world is convenience.
Especially
Family
members can have easy ways to contact more than
before
because
they can
use
a mobile application on their smartphone to
make
live
video calls to another person in their
family
anytime anywhere.
For example
, Thai
people
are
commonly
used
mobile application called “LINE” for communication at present, it is
very
simple, while
family
members can connect together when their mobile connection to the internet.
In the past communication between
people
who are not in the same place is difficult, whereas nowadays fantastic
technology
makes
it easier, this was a
positive
development in the
people
interaction. Students who study aboard or workers who work far from their home can stay in touch with their
family
, they can talk to their parents or their children like face-to-face talking while they are not staying in front of each other. This effect of
technology
makes
people
feel happier and
also
do not feel desolate or depressed when
people
cannot stay with their
family
.
For instance
, my Burmese worker work and stay in Thailand, she can contact with her daughter at Myanmar
easily
by using the mobile application on her smartphone and internet.
In conclusion
, present
technology
changes
the
family
relationship a lot, it
makes
family
members are closer and happier.
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