Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development? 16: 36 v.25
Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development? 16: 36 v. 25
Nowadays, technology has changed our lives and our interaction between people. There are different types of relationships that people make and also the remaining relationships. In this essay, I will give my answer to the statement, whether it is a positive or a negative development.
First of all, in my point of view, technology makes this world becomes smaller as anyone can contact any person in the world. This is one type of the interactions, people start to know each others easily. For instance, Facebook, Twitter, Instagram and other social media can help people to contact each other freely. It helps them to keep in touch with each others as well. Another example is that couples who live in different parts of the world can still remain their friendships and contact each other via technology or electronic devices that they have. This is one of the types of relationships that could arise from the improvement of technology.
Secondly, there are also other different kinds of relationships that can be mentioned when the technology has changed. People will have less face-to-face conversation, they will concentrate more on the mobile phone and people on the screen. I think this is a bad situation that arise when the technology has improved.
Lastly, in my point of view, the improvement of technology can give both positive and negative to the different kind of relationships. However, if people can use it effectively and properly I think it will give benefits to people who use it carefully.
Nowadays,
technology
has
changed
our
lives
and our interaction between
people
. There are
different
types of
relationships
that
people
make
and
also
the remaining
relationships
. In this essay, I will give my answer to the statement, whether it is a
positive
or a
negative
development.
First of all
, in my point of view,
technology
makes
this world becomes smaller
as
anyone can contact any person in the world. This is one type of the interactions,
people
start
to know each
others
easily
.
For instance
, Facebook, Twitter, Instagram and
other
social media can
help
people
to contact each
other
freely
. It
helps
them to
keep
in touch with each
others
as well
. Another example is that couples who
live
in
different
parts of the world can
still
remain their friendships and contact each
other
via
technology
or electronic devices that they have. This is one of the types of
relationships
that could arise from the improvement of technology.
Secondly
, there are
also
other
different
kinds of
relationships
that can
be mentioned
when the
technology
has
changed
.
People
will have less face-to-face conversation, they will concentrate more on the mobile phone and
people
on the screen. I
think
this is a
bad
situation that arise when the
technology
has
improved
.
Lastly
, in my point of view, the improvement of
technology
can give both
positive
and
negative
to the
different
kind of
relationships
.
However
, if
people
can
use
it
effectively
and
properly
I
think
it will give benefits to
people
who
use
it
carefully
.
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