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Nowadays, the quantity of garbage increasing rapidly and it is becoming a problem. Write an essay discussing the following: What are the issues for this problem and what can be done to resolve it? v.1

Nowadays, the quantity of garbage increasing rapidly and it is becoming a problem. Write an essay discussing the following: What are the issues for this problem and what can be done to resolve it? v. 1
People's choices differ as regards shopping, while some like to shop via the internet, others like the traditional means. In my opinion, I consider the physical store shopping arrangement as it is cheaper and also quality can be verified. One the one hand, the physical shopping setting helps buyers get a good bargain for items. This is because, sellers want quick turnover and repeated purchases so they reduce their prices to attract customers as compared to online shopping where prices of goods are usually inflated. Furthermore, the quality of products begins purchased can be ascertained at the point of sale unlike in online shopping where it is not possible. Research has shown that 45. 2 per cent of products bought online were returned as a result of poor quality. Thus, making the reliance on online product to be in doubt. On the other hand, some people shop online, maybe because of the ease of shopping it provides. Here buying can be done from the comfort of one's home or office and it gets delivered to. In addition, the supporters of this style of shopping, like the pricing comparison it affords them. Prices of goods, for instance, can be checked from different online stores for at the same time without the sellers been aware. Therefore, making comparing product prices easier without any of the stores knowing. In conclusion, while people may vary in their choices, I prefer the physical store shopping arrangement, because it affords me better prices and quality of products can be seen before buying.
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People
's choices differ as regards
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shopping
, while
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some
like to shop via the internet, others like the traditional means. In my opinion, I consider the physical
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store
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shopping
arrangement as it is cheaper and
also
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quality
can
be verified
.

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One
the one hand, the physical
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shopping
setting
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helps
buyers
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get
a
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good
bargain for items. This is
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because
, sellers want quick turnover and repeated
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purchases
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so
they
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reduce
their
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prices
to attract customers as compared to
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online
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shopping
where
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prices
of
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goods
are
usually
inflated.
Furthermore
, the
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quality
of
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products
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begins
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purchased
can
be ascertained
at the point of sale unlike in
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online
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shopping
where it is not possible. Research has shown that 45. 2 per cent of
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products
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bought
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online
were returned
as a result
of poor
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quality
.
Thus
, making the reliance on
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online
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product
to be in doubt.

On the other hand
,
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some
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people
shop
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online
, maybe
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because
of the
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ease
of
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shopping
it provides. Here buying can
be done
from the comfort of one's home or office and it
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gets
delivered to.
In addition
, the supporters of this style of
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shopping
, like the pricing comparison it affords them.
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Prices
of
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goods
,
for instance
, can be
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checked
from
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different
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online
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stores
for at the same time without the sellers been aware.
Therefore
, making comparing
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product
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prices
easier without any of the
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stores
knowing.

In conclusion
, while
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people
may vary in their choices, I prefer the physical
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store
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shopping
arrangement,
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because
it affords me better
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prices
and
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quality
of
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products
can be
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seen
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before
buying.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes
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IELTS essay Nowadays, the quantity of garbage increasing rapidly and it is becoming a problem. Write an essay discussing the following: What are the issues for this problem and what can be done to resolve it? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
256 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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