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Nowadays the increasing amount garbage is a real concern. Why is this happening? What can be done to resolve this? v.3

Dear Sir, This is to bring in to your notice that the garbage collection process is not working fine. The wastes are usually wrapped and kept in front of our homes. however, for the past two months, we do no see it is been collected in a regular manner. Earlier the collection was four time a week, but in the above mentioned period it seems to be only twice a week. Our neighborhood is completely filled families and there are hardly any shops. As a result, there is always a good amount of rubbish is generated. Most of it are food waste or from fruits and vegetables. Or in other terms they are degradable wastes which attracts insects and flies very soon. Since this is the case, there is a major fear of disease spread among children due to insects. As the representatives of the neighborhood, we request you to direct your team to follow the four time collection for a week. It is also fine if it is thrice a week. But, we want you to let us know the days when will the collection happen. We hope that you understand our concern and make sure a robust process in put in place and also we will get a reply to this letter. Thanking youconcerned citizen.
Dear Sir, This is to bring in to your notice that the garbage
collection
process is not working fine. The wastes are
usually
wrapped and
kept
in front of our homes.
however
, for the past two months, we do no
see
it
is been
collected in a regular manner. Earlier the
collection
was four time a
week
,
but
in the above mentioned period it seems to be
only
twice a
week
. Our neighborhood is completely filled families and there are hardly any shops.
As a result
, there is always a
good
amount of rubbish
is generated
. Most of it are food waste or from fruits and vegetables. Or in other terms they are degradable wastes which attracts insects and flies
very
soon
. Since this is the case, there is a major fear of disease spread among children due to insects. As the representatives of the neighborhood, we request you to direct your team to follow the four time
collection
for a
week
. It is
also
fine if it is thrice a
week
.
But
, we want you to
let
us know the days when will the
collection
happen.

We hope that you understand our concern and
make
sure a robust process in put in place and
also
we will
get
a reply to this letter.

Thanking youconcerned citizen.
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IELTS letter the system used for rubbish/garbage collection in your local area is not working properly and causing problems. Write a letter to local council, in your letter 1. describe how the garbage colllection system is not working properly 2. explain how it affects your neighborhood 3. suggest what shuld be done about the problem.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
217 words
6.5
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