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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television, magazine, newspaper and other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people. v.278

Television, magazine, newspaper and other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people. v. 278
Man is a social animal. Being so, he cannot live on his own without interacting with other individuals. According to prediction of scientists, people will communicate in only one dialect globally. As per my opinion, if such happens in future, it will be detrimental to mankind. To begin with, learning a new dialect requires frequent practice. Any language has 4 aspects associated with it, if you want to master in that, namely, listening, writing, speaking and reading. Acquiring knowledge in all these skills is quite a tedious task. To exemplify, my cousin who originally hails from India, but currently living in Montreal, a french dominated Canadian province, is struggling hard to learn the local diction of that area. Sometimes, he repents his decision of moving to that region due to linguistic barriers. Also, universal language can have a bad influence on the cultural diversity of the world, local literature will be completely lost if everyone will begin in communicating in the same language. This can be evident from the fact that many languages have already become extinct. It is very disturbing for the humanity. Contrary to this, using common mode of communication can aid an individual in settling anywhere in any part of the earth by easily expressing his views and opinions. In this contemporary world, where the world is a global village, this can provide a boon in getting employed. For an instance, English which is spoken in many countries, helped me a lot in graduating from Chinese University. To conclude, after carefully observing the pros and the cons of using a common phrase for communication, it is obvious that, it has a minor benefit as compared to the negatives associated with it.
Man
is a social animal. Being
so
, he cannot
live
on his
own
without interacting with other individuals. According to prediction of scientists,
people
will communicate in
only
one dialect globally. As per my opinion, if such happens
in future
, it will be detrimental to mankind.

To
begin
with, learning a new dialect requires frequent practice. Any
language
has 4 aspects associated with it, if you want to master in that,
namely
, listening, writing, speaking and reading. Acquiring knowledge in all these
skills
is quite a tedious task. To exemplify, my cousin who
originally
hails from India,
but
currently
living in Montreal, a
french
dominated Canadian province, is struggling
hard
to learn the local diction of that area.
Sometimes
, he repents his decision of moving to that region due to linguistic barriers.
Also
, universal
language
can have a
bad
influence on the cultural diversity of the world, local literature will be completely lost if everyone will
begin
in communicating in
the same
language
. This can be evident from the fact that
many
languages
have already become extinct. It is
very
disturbing for the humanity.

Contrary to this, using common mode of communication can aid an individual in settling anywhere in any part of the earth by
easily
expressing his views and opinions. In this contemporary world, where the world is a global village, this can provide a boon in getting employed. For an instance, English which
is spoken
in
many
countries,
helped
me a lot in graduating from Chinese University.

To conclude
, after
carefully
observing the pros and the cons of using a common phrase for communication, it is obvious that, it has a minor benefit as compared to the negatives associated with it.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Television, magazine, newspaper and other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people. v. 278

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
284 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
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