There are a variety of perspectives about which are the crucial factors that can be used to reflect the prosperous nation. While I would agree that economic progress is a useful method to assess a country, I contend that there are several factors can evaluate a nation’s success and education systems, to certain extend, is the most important factor.
Education systems and crime rate should be considered as the key factors in deciding a prosperous country. Firstly, a good education system included schools, colleges and universities has an important role to play in educating latent talents and bearing a large number of labours for nations. Secondly, crime rate should also be taken into account as the main contributor that has the positive effects on the country’ success. In other words, average crime rate indicates the adequacy of the citizen. A country with a high crime rate, it means innumerable citizens are living in poverty and the measures should be taken to alleviate and improve the people’s living standard.
In my opinion, a country’s education system should be seen as the most important indicator of its prosperity and level of development. The reason for this is education has an enormous impact on both economic and crime rates. People who are living in a good educational environment are not only taught common knowledge but also have better consciousness about moral principles. Those who are well educated have a better consciousness which helps them know what is the right things to do and also seeking for a job that can help them cover the cost of living.
To sum up, there are several factors that can be used to assess a country’s success, but I would contend that education plays an important role in the prosperity of a nation.
There are a variety of
perspectives about
which are the crucial
factors
that can be
used
to reflect the prosperous
nation
. While I would
agree
that economic progress is a useful method to assess a
country
, I contend that there are several
factors
can evaluate a
nation’s
success and
education
systems
, to certain
extend
, is the most
important
factor.
Education
systems
and
crime
rate
should
be considered
as the key
factors
in deciding a prosperous
country
.
Firstly
, a
good
education
system
included schools, colleges and universities has an
important
role to play in educating latent talents and bearing
a large number of
labours
for
nations
.
Secondly
,
crime
rate
should
also
be taken
into account as the main contributor that has the
positive
effects on the
country’
success.
In other words
, average
crime
rate
indicates the adequacy of the citizen. A
country
with a high
crime
rate
, it means innumerable citizens are living in poverty and the measures should
be taken
to alleviate and
improve
the
people
’s living standard.
In my opinion, a
country’s
education
system
should be
seen
as the most
important
indicator of its prosperity and level of development.
The reason for this is
education
has an enormous impact on both economic and
crime
rates
.
People
who are living in a
good
educational environment are not
only
taught common knowledge
but
also
have better consciousness about moral principles. Those who are
well educated
have a better consciousness which
helps
them know what is the right things to do and
also
seeking for a job that can
help
them cover the cost of living.
To sum up, there are several
factors
that can be
used
to assess a
country’s
success,
but
I would contend that
education
plays an
important
role in the prosperity of a
nation
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes