Nowadays parents become more stressful than in the past when thinking about their kids’ future. Lots of parents wish to put their children into school as early as they could, but ignore whether or not their kids are suitable to school. I believe kids should attend school in their appropriate age.
Admittedly, to let teenagers go to school and start studying early can help them become more knowledgeable than peer, and that is the main reason for why some parents advocate this opinion. Parents believe the kids will become mature and clever if been educated longer and earlier. So that it is possible for kids to become the winner in todays’ competitive world. Moreover, parents also consider that if the kids start education early, they can spend their free time on their interest, since they have already learn what they need in young age.
However, I believe kids should learn what they need during proper age. First and foremost, it is impossible to let children master too difficult knowledge since their brains are not mature enough to understand except they are over 7. This will cause those young kids have to spend more time in learning. And in a long-term some teenagers have a negative attitude toward learning because of a long length of time in boring study. Another reasons is that kids who over 7 can express their thought more clearly than younger one, since they have complete their language learning and not only can they understand teachers’ explanation in knowledge but also they are competent to voice out what they think about.
Overall, to compare two views, I tend to support kids should start their learning experience after 7. Because they have better comprehensive ability and language skill than younger one.
Nowadays
parents
become
more stressful than in the past when thinking about their
kids’
future. Lots of
parents
wish to put their children into
school
as early as they could,
but
ignore
whether or not
their
kids
are suitable to
school
. I believe
kids
should attend
school
in their appropriate age.
Admittedly
, to
let
teenagers
go to
school
and
start
studying early can
help
them
become
more knowledgeable than peer, and
that is
the main reason for why
some
parents
advocate this opinion.
Parents
believe the
kids
will
become
mature and clever if
been educated
longer and earlier.
So
that it is possible for
kids
to
become
the winner in
todays
’ competitive world.
Moreover
,
parents
also
consider that if the
kids
start
education early, they can spend their free time on their interest, since they have already
learn
what they need in young age.
However
, I believe
kids
should learn what they need during proper age.
First
and foremost, it is impossible to
let
children master too difficult knowledge since their brains are not mature
enough
to understand except they are over 7. This will cause those young
kids
have to
spend more time in
learning
. And in a long-term
some
teenagers
have a
negative
attitude toward
learning
because
of a long length of time in boring study. Another reasons
is
that
kids
who over 7 can express their
thought
more
clearly
than younger one, since they have complete their language
learning
and not
only
can they understand teachers’ explanation in knowledge
but
also
they are competent to voice out what they
think
about.
Overall
, to compare two views, I tend to support
kids
should
start
their
learning
experience after 7.
Because
they have better comprehensive ability and language
skill
than younger one.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
27Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes