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Nowadays, some employers think that formal academic qualifications are more important than life experience or personal qualities when they look for new employees. Why is it the case? Is it a positive or negative development? v.2

Prosperity is the number one priority of business owners, however, to hire an applicant one should meet the qualifications required for a certain job; this includes a graduate of higher education. On the contrary people who have lack of education but full of expertise are less priority otherwise. This essay will discuss the reasons and benefits of this circumstances. First, theoretical and ethical framework must be considered, in this case students have to gain knowledge from university by studying four or more years in academic course which they could utilise it when they land a job. In addition, while they are at university, on the job training are being offered and this would become some sort of experience for them which they could internalise on their field of work. Moreover, a staff could not be hired if they don’t have eligibility by getting a professional license, for example medical license, a doctor should perform good medical practice towards their patients to protect his licensure not being revoked. By doing so staff could perform their task diligently and this could lead to a substantial work productivity. On the other hand, the risk of hiring an applicant without a theory-base knowledge is inevitable although they are proficient on their skills. When a person work without a license they do not have a reservation from working recklessly because they do not have a license to protect. This can have a bad effect on the achievement of business establishment. In conclusion, I believe that to prosper in business sector, an employer must accept an applicant who can carry out the work professionally and responsibly in some way this could be resulted in more successful opportunity between the staff and the job provider.
Prosperity is the number one priority of business owners,
however
, to hire an applicant one should
meet
the qualifications required for a certain
job
; this includes a graduate of higher education.
On the contrary
people
who have lack of education
but
full of expertise are less priority
otherwise
. This essay will discuss the reasons and benefits of
this
circumstances.

First
, theoretical and ethical framework
must
be considered
,
in this case
students
have to
gain knowledge from university by studying four or more years in academic course which they could
utilise
it when they land a
job
.
In addition
, while they are at university, on the
job
training are
being offered
and this would become
some
sort of experience for them which they could
internalise
on their field of
work
.
Moreover
, a staff could not
be hired
if they don’t have eligibility by getting a professional
license
,
for example
medical
license
, a doctor should perform
good
medical practice towards their patients to protect his licensure not
being revoked
. By doing
so
staff could perform their task
diligently
and this could lead to a substantial
work
productivity.

On the other hand
, the
risk
of hiring an applicant without a theory-base knowledge is inevitable although they are proficient on their
skills
. When a person
work
without a
license
they do not have a reservation from working
recklessly
because
they do not have a
license
to protect. This can have a
bad
effect on the achievement of business establishment.

In conclusion
, I believe that to prosper in business sector, an employer
must
accept an applicant who can carry out the
work
professionally
and
responsibly
in
some
way this could
be resulted
in more successful opportunity between the staff and the
job
provider.
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IELTS essay Nowadays employers consider formal academic qualifications more important than the life experiences and personal qualities. Why is that? Is this a positive or negative development?

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288 words
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