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Nowadays, robots can help people to do many things. Do you think it's a good idea or not? Why? Include reasons and details in your response. v.1

Nowadays, robots can help people to do many things. Do you think it's a good idea or not? Why? Include reasons and details in your response. v. 1
In this era, different mother tongues are at the edge of lost due to its less adoption by groups. It is argued that the authorities should save these minority languages by funding. Whilst, some thought that this might be a wastage. This essay agrees that the ministry should invest money to protect these tongues. This essay will discuss both points of view. To commence with, the public who is in the favour of language protection is only because of their inability to understand other mother tongues. Moreover, this may help to enhance the communication level of the nation. In other words, native languages are more convenient for uneducated people to exchange information in spite of their illiteracy among other language skills. For instance, India is the only country where twenty three languages are spoken in its different provinces and Hindi is considered as its mother tongue. If the government does not promote this language, then the whole officials of the country will be disturbed. On the other hand, many disagree and feel that spending money would not worth and assume it a waste. This population might belong to educated community. So, they do not feel infeasibility to communicate in other tongues. The elimination of various state languages may result in loss of cultural diversity and identity of such minorities. Consequently, this would completely lead to the entire information cutoff. Sanskrit is one of the suitable examples among those languages which are totally extinct now. This tongue is widely used in various ancient holy books and its script is impossible to understand without an expert. In conclusion, funding uncommon languages make communication possible in different areas of the country, some still feel comfortable without investing in endangering languages. However, as long as we know the importance of information, communication through these minority languages, investing money in such sector will be proved fruitful.
In this era,
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different
mother
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tongues
are at the edge of lost due to its less adoption by groups. It
is argued
that the authorities should save these minority
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languages
by funding. Whilst,
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some
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thought
that this might be a wastage. This essay
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agrees
that the ministry should invest money to protect these
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tongues
. This essay will discuss both points of view.

To commence with, the public who is in the
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favour
of
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language
protection is
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only
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because
of their inability to understand
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other
mother
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tongues
.
Moreover
, this may
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help
to enhance the communication level of the nation. In
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other
words, native
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languages
are more convenient for uneducated
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people
to exchange information
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in spite of
their illiteracy among
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other
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language
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skills
.
For instance
, India is the
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only
country where
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twenty three
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languages
are spoken
in its
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different
provinces and Hindi
is considered
as its mother
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tongue
. If the
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government
does not promote this
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language
, then the whole officials of the country will
be disturbed
.

On the
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other
hand,
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many
disagree and feel that spending money would not
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worth
and assume it a waste. This population might belong to educated community.
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So
, they do not feel
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infeasibility
to communicate in
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other
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tongues
. The elimination of various state
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languages
may result in loss of cultural diversity and identity of such minorities.
Consequently
, this would completely lead to the entire information cutoff. Sanskrit is one of the suitable examples among those
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languages
which are
totally
extinct
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now
. This
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tongue
is
widely
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used
in various ancient holy books and its script is impossible to understand without an expert.

In conclusion
, funding uncommon
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languages
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make
communication possible in
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different
areas of the country,
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some
still
feel comfortable without investing in endangering
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languages
.
However
, as long as we know the importance of information, communication through these minority
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
languages
, investing money in such sector will
be proved
fruitful.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, robots can help people to do many things. Do you think it's a good idea or not? Why? Include reasons and details in your response. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
311 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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