Nowadays more people are choosing to live with friends or alone rather than with their families. This trend is likely to have a negative impact on communities. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion? v.3
Nowadays more people are choosing to live with friends or alone rather than with their families. This trend is likely to have a negative impact on communities. with this opinion? v. 3
Now, most of people decide stay with their friends or alone rather than with their families. This phenomenon has negative impact on society. I agree that people who live without their families will make uncomfortable their communities.
Firstly, a large majority of societies thinking about the people who stay without control with their families, it will make they become uncontrollable like comeback to home early morning and invite their friends to stay up together and make disturb their neighbor.
Secondly, living with friends or alone will be danger because without their families so no body to protect and control them. So if there is thief it makes the people in bad situation.
Finally, the people cannot live alone because they need people around them to help or keep if they have a trouble. And the most important for many people are family. So they should stay with their family in order to safety and make their neighbor feel comfortable to live close with them.
In conclusion, I think people should choose live with their families because it make people more safety and keep them from bad situation. So, it make communities cozy to stay near with them.
Now
, most of
people
decide
stay
with their friends or alone
rather
than with their
families
. This phenomenon has
negative
impact on society. I
agree
that
people
who
live
without their
families
will
make
uncomfortable their communities.
Firstly
, a large majority of societies thinking about the
people
who
stay
without control with their
families
, it will
make
they become uncontrollable like comeback to home early morning and invite their friends to
stay
up together and
make
disturb their neighbor.
Secondly
, living with friends or alone will be
danger
because
without their
families
so
no body
to protect and control them.
So if
there is thief it
makes
the
people
in
bad
situation.
Finally
, the
people
cannot
live
alone
because
they need
people
around them to
help
or
keep
if they have a trouble. And the most
important
for
many
people
are
family
.
So
they should
stay
with their
family
in order to safety and
make
their neighbor feel comfortable to
live
close with them.
In conclusion
, I
think
people
should choose
live
with their
families
because
it
make
people
more safety and
keep
them from
bad
situation.
So
, it
make
communities cozy to
stay
near with them.
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