In modern society, there is an upward tendency in the trend of becoming parents later of many couples. From my perspective, it gives more disadvantageous than advantageous influences.
With regard to benefits, there are two main points that people make a decision to give birth at later stages of life. Firstly, they have more time to enjoy their life when they are young. It is understandable that when they have babies, most of time for personal hobbies and passions usually reduces and instead they spend this time raising their children. The second point is ensuring finance that supports for their children to live in a better condition. More often than not they just start their career and have lower income so they decide to focus on earning money until they have strong finance enough to take responsibility of their children.
However, it is undeniable that drawbacks of having babies later bring to family life and society. The more time they spend delaying to have babies, the more negative the impact on both giving and raising babies. In fact, it is hard for mothers over the age of 35 to ensure health for both mothers and babies in the prenatal and postnatal period. Because at that ages, the health and physiology of women are not as good as when they were young. Therefore, their babies being born may be less physically healthy. In addition, the choice of having children later usually make an age gap between two generations. This creates an barrier to understand and communicate with their offspring in parenting.
In conclusion, there are some reasons why current people prefer to have babies when being older, but I believed that this makes more negative than positive impacts for on family life.
In modern society, there is an upward tendency in the trend of becoming parents
later
of
many
couples. From my perspective, it gives more disadvantageous than advantageous influences.
With regard to benefits, there are two main points that
people
make
a decision to give birth at
later
stages of
life
.
Firstly
, they have more
time
to enjoy their
life
when they are young. It is understandable that when they have
babies
, most of
time
for personal hobbies and passions
usually
reduces
and
instead
they spend this
time
raising their children. The second point is ensuring finance that supports for their children to
live
in a better condition. More
often
than not they
just
start
their career and have lower income
so
they decide to focus on earning money until they have strong finance
enough
to take responsibility of their children.
However
, it is undeniable that drawbacks of having
babies
later
bring to family
life
and society. The more
time
they spend
delaying to have
babies
, the more
negative
the impact on both giving and raising
babies
. In fact, it is
hard
for mothers over the age of 35 to ensure health for both mothers and
babies
in the prenatal and postnatal period.
Because
at that ages, the health and physiology of women are not as
good
as when they were young.
Therefore
, their
babies
being born
may be less
physically
healthy.
In addition
, the choice of having children
later
usually
make
an age gap between two generations. This creates
an
barrier to understand and communicate with their offspring in parenting.
In conclusion
, there are
some
reasons why
current
people
prefer to have
babies
when being older,
but
I believed that this
makes
more
negative
than
positive
impacts for on family
life
.
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