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Nowadays media is paying a lot of attention to life stories of famous people in fields such as cinema, sports and modeling. What are the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or negative trend? v.2

Nowadays media is paying a lot of attention to life stories of famous people in fields such as cinema, sports and modeling. What are the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or negative trend? v. 2
There is no doubt that these days social media is playing an effective role in our daily life, however, the question: What are the advantages and disadvantages of displaying news about famous people? Is being a controversial issue nowadays. In this essay I am going to examine this phenomenon from both viewpoints. Several causes are beyond the interest of the media in such popular people for instance, increase their followers in Instagram and Twitter, post more advertisements and get more attention from users and spread various opinions in a hidden way. On one side of the argument, there are people who argue that famous people news can help us to know more about their daily lives and what kind of goods or services they are using regularly so we can try the same because these will be the best. Furthermore, some of the social media influencers are doctors, scientists and inventors, so people can get some beneficial information through their updates. For example, during the disaster of Coronavirus a lot of news was adapted from the famous authorized people. On the other hand, it is possible to consider it with the opposing case, it is often argued that in fact no one cares about famous people, daily life because most of them are just looking for money and they do not care about others. Moreover, their private life will not add any benefit to us. Their interests, habits and routines may not be applicable to everyone and sometimes it is against our Islamic rules. One good illustration here is the effect of these influencers on teenagers, sometimes it leads to suicide or hurting themselves in order to copy what they have seen. In conclusion, as we have seen there is no easy answer to this question, however, I guess media have to stop following popular people daily news because it does not have any positive feedback on the regular ones.
There is no doubt that these days social
media
is playing an effective role in our
daily
life,
however
, the question: What are the advantages and disadvantages of displaying
news
about
famous
people
? Is being a controversial issue nowadays. In this essay I am going to examine this phenomenon from both viewpoints.

Several causes are beyond the interest of the
media
in such popular
people
for instance
, increase their followers in Instagram and Twitter, post more advertisements and
get
more attention from users and spread various opinions
in a hidden way
.

On one side of the argument, there are
people
who argue that
famous
people
news
can
help
us to know more about their
daily
lives
and what kind of
goods
or services they are using
regularly
so
we can try the same
because
these will be the best.
Furthermore
,
some of the
social
media
influencers are doctors, scientists and inventors,
so
people
can
get
some
beneficial information through their updates.
For example
, during the disaster of Coronavirus
a lot of
news
was adapted
from the
famous
authorized
people
.

On the other hand
, it is possible to consider it with the opposing case, it is
often
argued that in fact no one cares about
famous
people
,
daily
life
because
most of them are
just
looking for
money and
they do not care about others.
Moreover
, their private life will not
add
any benefit to us. Their interests, habits and routines may not be applicable to everyone and
sometimes
it is against our Islamic
rules
. One
good
illustration here is the effect of these influencers on
teenagers
,
sometimes
it leads to suicide or hurting themselves in order to copy what they have
seen
.

In conclusion
, as we have
seen
there is no easy answer to this question,
however
, I guess
media
have to
stop
following popular
people
daily
news
because
it does not have any
positive
feedback on the regular ones.
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23Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Nowadays media is paying a lot of attention to life stories of famous people in fields such as cinema, sports and modeling. What are the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or negative trend? v. 2

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
320 words
6
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