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Nowadays many students choose to study abroad at university level Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad and give your opinion about whether it is a good idea v.2

Nowadays many students choose to study abroad at university level Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad and give your opinion about whether it is a good idea v. 2
Nowadays several students prefer to study at university in a foreign country. Although there are a few drawbacks while studying abroad, I believe that this is a positive choice along with many benefits. There are some difficulties overseas students may encounter. This is to say, international universities can be extremely expensive, starting from the application to the tuition fees. For example, most of the time if you go as an international student to study abroad, prices can be three times higher than for a national student. As a matter of fact, you should make sure to do a proper research, not only about the international institution, but also about personal monthly expenses such as, rent, transportation, groceries and leisure, so that before moving abroad you have the chance save enough money to complete your studies, and support yourself without struggling. Another disadvantage might be cultural shock, moving abroad without any family member can be tough. In addition, you should be mentally prepared and make sure you are strong enough to overcome all the challenges along the way. For instance, might be difficult to make new friends, find your favorite food, or even things you like to do in a foreign country, this situation can turn into homesickness, making you feel you want to go back to your home country. On the other hand, studying abroad can be the most memorable experience in your life. For this reason, you can develop yourself in different ways. For example, going through hardships sometimes can make you a better person, bringing new perspectives and experiences to your life, challenges can also teach you how to be independent and deal with your emotions in a better way. For instance, while studying in a prestigious institution you can meet people from all over the world, improve your second language, expand your knowledge, learn about a new culture, and make lifelong friends. Furthermore, graduating from an international recognized university can lead you to better job opportunities, network and higher salary. In conclusion, I believe that studying overseas has more advantages than disadvantages. As a result, this experience can bring several positive changes into your life together with greater employment opportunities and personal development.
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prefer to study at university in a foreign country. Although there are a few drawbacks while
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studying
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abroad
, I believe that this is a
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positive
choice along with
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many
benefits.

There are
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some
difficulties overseas
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students
may encounter. This is to say,
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international
universities can be
extremely
expensive, starting from the application to the tuition fees.
For example
, most of the time if you go as an
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international
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student
to study
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abroad
, prices can be three times higher than for a national
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student
. As a matter of fact, you should
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make
sure to do a proper research, not
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only
about the
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international
institution,
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but
also
about personal monthly expenses such as, rent, transportation, groceries and leisure,
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so
that
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before
moving
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abroad
you have the chance save
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enough
money to complete your studies, and support yourself without struggling. Another disadvantage might be cultural shock, moving
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abroad
without any family member can be tough.
In addition
, you should be mentally prepared and
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make
sure you are strong
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enough
to overcome all the challenges along the way.
For instance
, might be difficult to
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make
new friends, find your favorite food, or even things you like to do in a foreign country, this situation can turn into homesickness, making you feel you want to go back to your home country.

On the other hand
,
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studying
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abroad
can be the most memorable experience in your life.
For this reason
, you can develop yourself in
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different
ways.
For example
, going through hardships
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sometimes
can
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make
you a better person, bringing new perspectives and experiences to your life, challenges can
also
teach you how to be independent and deal with your emotions in a better way.
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instance, while
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studying
in a prestigious institution you can
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meet
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people
from all over the world,
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improve
your second language, expand your knowledge, learn about a new culture, and
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make
lifelong friends.
Furthermore
, graduating from an
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international
recognized university can lead you to better job opportunities, network and higher salary.

In conclusion
, I believe that
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studying
overseas has more advantages than disadvantages.
As a result
, this experience can bring several
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positive
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changes
into your life together with greater employment opportunities and personal development.
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IELTS essay Nowadays many students choose to study abroad at university level Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad and give your opinion about whether it is a good idea v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
366 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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