Whether or not people work part time or full time from home is widely debated with many people claiming that working from home has no benefit.
In my opinion this argument merit serious consideration and I will explain why in this easy with pertinent argument and example. There are myriad of argument in support of my stance. The most conspicuous one is that, walking from home make increases the risk of laziness for some parent as a result there become unfit because of immobility.
Another, pivotal aspect of my argument is that it increase their risk of Oedema and diabetes unlike those working from office that are always moving around from one office to another.
For instance, underpinning the aforementioned an empirical of my argument is that people will start lying because they work from home, they will want to spent more time with their family than focuses on the job that they are paid to do from home.
In view of the argument outlined above, one can conclude that there are more advantages to working in the office than from home. This shows that the benefit of working from office are too great to be ignored. Nevertheless the advantages of working from home should not be overlooked either.
Whether or not
people
work
part time
or full time from home is
widely
debated with
many
people
claiming that
working
from home has no benefit.
In my opinion this
argument
merit serious consideration and I will
explain
why in this easy with pertinent
argument
and example. There are myriad of
argument
in support of my stance. The most conspicuous one is that, walking from home
make
increases the
risk
of laziness for
some
parent
as a result
there become unfit
because
of immobility.
Another, pivotal aspect of my
argument
is that it increase their
risk
of
Oedema
and diabetes unlike those
working
from
office
that are always moving around from one
office
to another.
For instance
, underpinning the aforementioned
an empirical of
my
argument
is that
people
will
start
lying
because
they work from home, they will want to
spent
more time with their family than focuses on the job that they
are paid
to do from home.
In view of the
argument
outlined above, one can conclude that there are more advantages to
working
in the
office
than from home. This
shows
that the benefit of
working
from
office
are too great to be
ignored
.
Nevertheless
the advantages of
working
from home should not
be overlooked
either.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
15Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
6Mistakes