It is a known fact that cities are being changed and rebuilt by new techniques. It has to be admit that, there are merits and demerits. I personally believe that advantages outweigh
disadvantages.
On the one hand, technological advantages makes a peak change. To substantiate, technology improves the city by its changes. New buildings are being made by different type of architectural designs. New buildings are not easily destroyed by natural disasters like cyclone and flood. For example; large number of old buildings were destroyed by tsunami in Japan, but it affected very less number of new buildings. Moreover architectural differences and peculiarities makes the buildings different from one another, each building show it' s own identity.
However, culture and tradition changes by its nature. To clarify, we lose our culture that were followed by our grandparents. For example; nowadays we gives more importance to the beauty of the house rather than its appearance. We gives more importance to the designs but olden days they built houses which gives much more importance to nature culture and religion.
Furthermore, nothing goes wrong. Each building is a backbone of its city. Building inturns change the city. Modern buildings gives outstanding appearancestors of the city. It indicates how modern the city is.
In conclusion, we cannot deny the fact that each changes in this era is the part of modernisation. So rebuilding and redesigning is essential when we look in to the city development.
It is a known fact that
cities
are being
changed
and rebuilt by
new
techniques. It
has to
be
admit
that, there are merits and demerits. I
personally
believe that advantages
outweigh
disadvantages
.
On the one hand, technological advantages
makes
a peak
change
. To substantiate, technology
improves
the city by its
changes
.
New
buildings
are
being made
by
different
type of architectural designs.
New
buildings
are not
easily
destroyed
by natural disasters like cyclone and flood.
For example
; large number of
old
buildings
were
destroyed
by tsunami in Japan,
but
it
affected
very
less number of
new
buildings
.
Moreover
architectural differences and peculiarities
makes
the
buildings
different
from one another, each
building
show
it&
#039; s
own
identity.
However
, culture and tradition
changes
by its nature. To clarify, we lose our culture that
were followed
by our grandparents.
For example
; nowadays we
gives
more importance to the beauty of the
house
rather
than its appearance. We
gives
more importance to the designs
but
olden days they built
houses
which
gives
much more importance to nature culture and religion.
Furthermore
, nothing goes
wrong
. Each
building
is a backbone of its city.
Building
inturns
change
the city. Modern
buildings
gives
outstanding
appearancestors
of the city. It indicates how modern the city is.
In conclusion
, we cannot deny the fact that each
changes
in this era is the part of
modernisation
.
So
rebuilding and redesigning is essential when we look in to the city development.
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