Sports are replaced by online games and multimedia devices in modern era. No child is going out and doing some physical activity. This essay opines that its completely a negative development because it brings many disorders and huge impact on children’s mental and physical growth. This essay will discuss the effects and impacts of computer gaming on younger brains.
To begin with, due to dramatic change in technology ever since 19th century it has made possible that, a person can play any game which he can feel to play, and at his comfort without moving physically, confining to a idle place with the help of computer and digital tablets where they can download millions of games, but as they are kids they wouldn’t know what changes that kind of games would bring them in future. This is happening just because of lack of awareness of physical games and benefits of it. Other reasons could be busy parents who cannot able to spend time for their kids to play in leisure or go out with kid. For instance, one of my neighbour family always insists their kid to play digital online games as they could work peacefully without their kids disturbance.
Although computer games and streaming sites has some benefits such as intellectual behaviour development, one can have these benefits only when they can limit themselves to it. But, physical sports activities has many benefits when compared to computer games, one can learn what could a team work would help with and keeps body tone maintains a healthy life and physique if they continue them for the rest of their age
In conclusion, although computer games are at times acceptable, they need to be limited and sports activities needs to be encouraged all the time when leisure period is available, parents needs to make kids aware of what a physical sport can make them achieve and should monitor them while they are on computers or mobile devices.
Sports
are replaced
by online
games
and multimedia devices in modern era. No child is going out and doing
some
physical
activity. This essay opines that its completely a
negative
development
because
it brings
many
disorders and huge impact on children’s mental and
physical
growth. This essay will discuss the effects and impacts of computer gaming on younger brains.
To
begin
with, due to dramatic
change
in technology ever since 19th century it has made possible that, a person can
play
any game which he can feel to
play
, and at his comfort without moving
physically
, confining to
a
idle place with the
help
of computer and digital tablets where they can download millions of
games
,
but
as they are
kids
they wouldn’t know what
changes
that kind of
games
would bring them
in future
. This is happening
just
because
of lack of awareness of
physical
games
and
benefits
of it. Other reasons could be busy parents who
cannot able
to spend time for their
kids
to
play
in leisure or go out with
kid
.
For instance
, one of my
neighbour
family always insists their
kid
to
play
digital online
games
as they could work
peacefully
without their
kids
disturbance.
Although computer
games
and streaming sites has
some
benefits
such as intellectual
behaviour
development, one can have these
benefits
only
when they can limit themselves to it.
But
,
physical
sports
activities has
many
benefits
when compared to computer
games
, one can learn what could a team work would
help
with and
keeps
body tone maintains a healthy life and physique if they continue them for the rest of their age
In conclusion
, although computer
games
are at times acceptable, they need to
be limited
and
sports
activities needs to
be encouraged
all the time when leisure period is available, parents needs to
make
kids
aware of what a
physical
sport
can
make
them achieve and should monitor them while they are on computers or mobile devices.
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31Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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