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Some people claim that not enough of thewaste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recyclingis for governments to make it a legal requirementTo what extent do you think laws are needed tomake people recycle more of their waste? v.2

Some people claim that not enough of thewaste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recyclingis for governments to make it a legal requirement v. 2
In modern society, many people tend toavoid recycling home wastes. As a result, some people argue that the only solution is the governments to introduce a legal recycling Act. for homes. In my opinion, I strongly believe that the law is now necessary to tackle this issue. Many people today, living in a busy schedule, they think recycling is such a waste of time. To make people aware of environmental problems from home wastes, the government should make a strict law. Forinstance, limit the number of wastes in each home and set the trash out date to once a week, in this case, the volume of the wastes will be decreased, fewer wastes will make recycling easier. Thus, people will do more recycling than before. However, even with the laws above, some may not follow, so the government should establish fines if they do not follow the regulation. Take more fine from the rich to buy more recycling machines. With this method, people will be more careful about recycling laws. They would not want to pay for fine, so it will make them do it, even though they feel lazy or think it is wasting of time. To sum up, indeed, the issue of recycling from homes become quite serious these days. Today people often experience climate changes and the death of animals, global warming caused by the wastes, therefore, I think we need the law to make more people to recycle, and to save our environment.
In modern society,
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toavoid
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recycling
home
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some
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people
argue that the
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only
solution is the
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governments
to introduce a legal
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recycling
Act.
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for
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homes
. In my opinion, I
strongly
believe that the
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law
is
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now
necessary to tackle this issue.

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people
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today
, living in a busy schedule, they
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think
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recycling
is such a
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waste
of time.

To
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make
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people
aware of environmental problems from home
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wastes
, the
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government
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make
a strict
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law
.
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Forinstance
, limit the number of
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wastes
in each home and set the trash out date to once a week,
in this case
, the volume of the
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wastes
will
be decreased
, fewer
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wastes
will
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make
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recycling
easier.
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,
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people
will do more
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recycling
than
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.

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, even with the
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laws
above,
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some
may not follow,
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the
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should establish fines if they do not follow the regulation. Take more fine from the rich to
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buy
more
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machines. With this method,
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people
will be more careful about
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recycling
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laws
. They would not want to pay for fine,
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so
it will
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make
them do it,
even though
they feel lazy or
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think
it is wasting of time.

To sum up,
indeed
, the issue of
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recycling
from
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homes
become quite serious these days.
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Today
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people
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often
experience climate
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changes
and the death of animals, global warming caused by the
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wastes
,
therefore
, I
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think
we need the
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law
to
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make
more
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people
to recycle, and to save our environment.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
35Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes

IELTS essay Some people claim that not enough of thewaste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recyclingis for governments to make it a legal requirement v. 2

Essay
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247 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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