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Nowadays it is possible to use computers and mobile phones for automatic language translation, and there is no need for human translators and interpreters. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? v.1

Nowadays it is possible to use computers and mobile phones for automatic language translation, and there is no need for human translators and interpreters. v. 1
It is important to consider people prefer to work on school projects. While some of the people work with groups on school projects and others work alone. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument. Firstly, Most of the people wish to work on a school project with a get together because as a group they will not feel stress at work as well as discuss if required any help from others and share the work together. For example, especially in the school projects, if they want to organize an exam for students, all the people work on it everyone share some of the work with their excellence to conduct the exam. Some people will arrange and organize question papers and others will make the correction of the answer papers. Some people will go for invigilation. As a result, they will conduct exams properly. As a group they will enjoy their work as well. Secondly, some of the folks not willing to work as a group due to they cannot share their knowledge and some of them having inferiority. For example, If someone says to work on it, they cannot listen and how this guy saying to me work on it. Here individuality and ego will come into the picture and if asked something to them, they simply ignore or not participated in the program due to personal ego. These kind of people not help anybody as well as share their knowledge with them. In the conclusion, people who are willing to work as a group, they will enjoy their work and help to other co-workers and others having some personal issue. In my opinion, I would like to work as a group because I will enjoy the work and share the knowledge to everyone.
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people
prefer to
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work
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school
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projects
. While
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some of the
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people
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work
with
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groups
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school
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projects
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and others
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work
alone. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument.

Firstly
, Most of the
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people
wish to
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work
on a
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school
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project
with a
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get
together
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because
as a
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group
they will not feel
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stress
at
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work
as well
as discuss if required any
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help
from others and
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share
the
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work
together.
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,
especially
in the
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school
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projects
, if they want to organize an exam for students, all the
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people
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work
on it everyone
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share
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some of the
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work
with their excellence to conduct the exam.
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Some
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people
will arrange and organize question papers
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and others
will
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make
the correction of the answer papers.
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Some
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people
will go for invigilation.
As a result
, they will conduct exams
properly
. As a
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group
they will enjoy their
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work
as well
.

Secondly
,
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some of the
folks not willing to
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work
as a
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group
due to they cannot
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share
their knowledge and
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some
of them having inferiority.
For example
, If someone says to
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work
on it, they cannot listen and how this guy saying to me
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work
on it. Here individuality and ego will
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come
into the picture and if asked something to them, they
simply
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ignore
or not participated in the program due to personal ego.
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of
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people
not
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help
anybody
as well
as
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share
their knowledge with them.

In the conclusion,
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people
who are willing to
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work
as a
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group
, they will enjoy their
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work
and
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help
to
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other
co-workers
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and others
having
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some
personal issue. In my opinion, I would like to
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work
as a
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group
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because
I will enjoy the
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work
and
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share
the knowledge to everyone.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Nowadays it is possible to use computers and mobile phones for automatic language translation, and there is no need for human translators and interpreters. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
298 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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