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Some people marry shortly after finishing college. Others prefer to focus on their careers first and wait until later to get married. Which of these situations do you think is better? v.1

Some people marry shortly after finishing college. Others prefer to focus on their careers first and wait until later to get married. Which of these situations do you think is better? v. 1
Many varied forms of examination are being applied such as formal paper exams, exams on a computer or oral exams. Although some people believe that pen and paper exams are not effective in assessing educational achievement, I personally believe that exam type should be decided with regards to the student profile. For nearly a decade, paper exams have been mostly replaced by computer-assisted exams or oral exams, which give test takers flexibility and comfort. For example, IELTS, International English Language Testing System is an internationally recognized exam offering different types as paper based or computer delivered which make it easier to choose the type that test takers are confident with. In fact, even a paper based version of as IELTS involve two kinds of evaluation depending on printed test and a speaking exam making the test available for people with different expression styles. It is true that every person has his/her own way of learning. Similarly, when it is time to prove their learnings, the style for each person could possibly vary. To me, paper-based exams are safe and mostly available for people who can express themselves in writing. A recent research conducted by the British Education Council has stated that only one fourth of test takers are capable of expressing themselves in a paper based exam. Additionally, one fourth of the attendants, state that they find it more comfortable to take an exam orally. Surprisingly, the rest two forths of them maintain that they get higher scores on a computer based type. That shows the necessity of offering variations in exam types to address more people. In conclusion, despite the fact that many test takers are offered only pen and paper exam, it is significant to consider varied styles for a variety of people.
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believe that pen and paper exams are not effective in assessing educational achievement, I
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nearly
a decade, paper exams have been
mostly
replaced by computer-assisted exams or oral exams, which give
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test
takers flexibility and comfort.
For example
, IELTS, International English Language Testing System is an
internationally
recognized exam offering
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different
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types
as paper based or computer delivered which
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make
it easier to choose the
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type
that
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test
takers are confident with. In fact, even a paper based version of as IELTS involve two kinds of evaluation depending on printed
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test
and a speaking exam making the
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test
available for
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people
with
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different
expression styles.

It is true that every person has his/her
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own
way of learning.
Similarly
, when it is time to prove their learnings, the style for each person could
possibly
vary. To me, paper-based exams are safe and
mostly
available for
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people
who can express themselves in writing. A recent research conducted by the British Education Council has stated that
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only
one fourth of
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takers are capable of expressing themselves in a paper based exam.
Additionally
, one fourth of the attendants, state that they find it more comfortable to take an exam
orally
.
Surprisingly
, the rest two
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of them maintain that they
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get
higher scores on a computer based
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type
. That
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shows
the necessity of offering variations in exam
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types
to address more
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people
.

In conclusion
, despite the fact that
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takers
are offered
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IELTS essay Some people marry shortly after finishing college. Others prefer to focus on their careers first and wait until later to get married. Which of these situations do you think is better? v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
295 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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