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Nowadays it is common for people to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger. Do you agree or disagree that this trend will benefit society? v.4

Nowadays it is common for people to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger. that this trend will benefit society? v. 4
Learning a foreign speech in many nations continues to be the hot topic these days. Some individuals believe that the only reason for learning a foreign language is, in order to immigrate or work in a foreign country. While others argue that, these are not the only reasons as to why someone should learn a second language. This essay will discuss the above mentioned views in further detail. I agree, that there are other main factors as to why an individual should learn the unknown language. On one side, some individuals opine that learning a foreign language is essential nowadays, if you want to work in a non-native country because communicating with the people of different languages is essential tool to succeed in other countries. Moreover, it is important to communicate with your boss and understand, what he is trying to say to his employees. For example, a survey report submitted by an agency, stated that about 85% of the people in India learn more than two languages before they immigrate to another country for finding employment. On the other hand, other individuals animadvert that the only reason why people should learn outsider's language is not just for employment, but also to learn the culture and traditions of other nations. In addition, to understand the TV programmes and news which will be broadcasted live on the television on a regular basis in other kingdoms. To illustrate, a survey report submitted by the department, stated that about 65% of the people in Germany learn about other different cultures and ethics before visiting or migrating to their colleagues neighbourhood. To conclude, researching a foreign speech of many nations continues to be the hot topic these days. This essay discussed, why training in expat's language for the benefit of the employment has its benefits, but why studying a different dialect for other benefits is ultimately superior. I completely agree, that there are other main factors as to why an individual should learn the non-native language.
Learning a
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nations continues to be the hot topic these days.
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individuals
believe that the
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only
reason for learning a
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foreign
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language
is, in order to immigrate or work in a
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foreign
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country
. While others argue that, these are not the
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only
reasons as to why someone should
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learn
a second
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language
. This essay will discuss the above mentioned views in
further
detail. I
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agree
, that there are
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other
main factors as to why an
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individual
should
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learn
the unknown language.

On one side,
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some
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individuals
opine that learning a
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foreign
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language
is essential nowadays, if you want to work in a non-native
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country
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because
communicating with the
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people
of
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different
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languages
is essential tool to succeed in
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other
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countries
.
Moreover
, it is
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important
to communicate with your boss and understand, what he is trying to say to his employees.
For example
, a survey report submitted by an agency, stated that about 85% of the
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people
in India
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learn
more than two
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languages
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before
they immigrate to another
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country
for finding employment.

On the
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other
hand,
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other
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individuals
animadvert that the
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only
reason why
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people
should
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learn
outsider's
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language
is not
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just
for employment,
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but
also
to
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learn
the culture and traditions of
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other
nations.
In addition
, to understand the TV
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programmes
and news which will
be broadcasted
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live
on the television on a regular basis in
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other
kingdoms. To illustrate, a survey report submitted by the department, stated that about 65% of the
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people
in Germany
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learn
about
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other
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different
cultures and ethics
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before
visiting or migrating to their colleagues
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neighbourhood
.

To conclude
, researching a
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foreign
speech of
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many
nations continues to be the hot topic these days. This essay discussed, why training in expat's
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language
for the benefit of the employment has its benefits,
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but
why studying a
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different
dialect for
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other
benefits is
ultimately
superior. I completely
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agree
, that there are
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other
main factors as to why an
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individual
should
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learn
the non-native
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language
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Nowadays it is common for people to get married and have children in their thirties rather than when they are younger. that this trend will benefit society? v. 4

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
332 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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